Template:Did you know nominations/Buurtpoes Bledder

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The result was: promoted by Allen3 ^talk 21:30, 13 September 2013 (UTC)

Buurtpoes Bledder

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~~... that Buurtpoes Bledder (pictured) was a cat, and has his own Facebook page, despite being killed by a motorist on August 7?~~

Reviewed: Jeremy Geidt
Comment: If there are any issues, I am on holiday until Wednesday, so please wait for me to address issues until at least Wednesday, perhaps later

Created by Constablequackers (talk). Nominated by Matty.007 (talk) at 14:39, 9 August 2013 (UTC).

Comment by nominator: I am away for a few days until Wednesday 14 August, so please be patient, I will not reply until then. Thanks, Mat ty.007 14:49, 9 August 2013 (UTC)

Article length, date and compliance with policy check out - nice work. I think the hook could use some work though - having a Facebook page is probably not very unusual for cats and fan pages lasting past death is the norm... I would suggest something on his celebrity and/or on the media circus after his death. --ThaddeusB (talk) 00:55, 25 August 2013 (UTC)

OK, thanks ThaddeusB, I am on holiday at present, so will fix this when I return (Thursday). Thanks, Mat ty.007 11:16, 25 August 2013 (UTC)

OK, how's this: Alt 1: ... that when Buurtpoes Bledder (pictured) died, his death was covered in national news, including SBS 6 and De Telegraaf, despite Bledder being a cat? Is this a better hook, ThaddeusB? Thanks, Mat ty.007 09:35, 29 August 2013 (UTC)

Reviewer needed to check ALT1 hook. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:49, 5 September 2013 (UTC)

While the hook's length isn't too long, I'm going to suggest a slight rewording as the dangling despite being a cat sounds a bit awkward:

ALT2: ... that when the cat Buurtpoes Bledder (pictured) died, his death was covered in national news, including SBS 6 and De Telegraaf?

Will need a reviewer for this ALT2 hook. I, JethroBT ^{drop me a line} 20:33, 6 September 2013 (UTC)

Both hooks check out. (I added publication names to the cites in the article). Aymatth2 (talk) 18:18, 12 September 2013 (UTC)
- OK, thanks. I will use Alt 2. Thanks, Mat ty.007 18:46, 12 September 2013 (UTC)