Template:Did you know nominations/Bun Troy
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 22:38, 17 June 2014 (UTC)
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Bun Troy
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- ... that baseball pitcher Bun Troy (pictured), who won a doubleheader while pitching all nine innings of both games, was killed in action during World War I?
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5x expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nominated at 04:08, 7 June 2014 (UTC).
5x expanded, close paraphrasing avoided by occasional uses of quotes for tricky bits and interesting comments, faithful to sources, adequately sourced and written neutrally, hook sourced..but whould we add that it was a minor league it occurred in? Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 21:57, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
- I don't think it's needed since there's no assertion as to what type of league the feat was made in. The article is quite clear about which accomplishments were in minor and major league. My objective with a DYK hook is to make them accurate but concise, which I think is satisfied here. Cbl62 (talk) 22:00, 8 June 2014 (UTC)
