Template:Did you know nominations/Bronna Góra

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The result was: promoted by Redtigerxyz ^Talk 06:00, 21 June 2014 (UTC)

Bronna Góra

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... that explosives were used to speed up the digging of mass graves at the Bronna Góra (pictured)?

ALT1:... that Bronna Góra (pictured) became a place of mass killings because a railway stop was already there at the edge of the woods?
Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Erik Viktor Almquist.

Created by Poeticbent (talk). Self nominated at 04:41, 8 June 2014 (UTC).

The article is new enough and long enough and is well referenced. Neither of the proposed hooks is currently satisfactory. The original hook does not have an inline citation and ALT1 is not made out in the article. No doubt the site was convenient for the authorities but the article does not state the reason for choosing the location. How about: Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:38, 15 June 2014 (UTC)
ALT2 ... that in June 1942, 3,500 Jews from the Pińsk Ghetto and nearby Kobryn were "processed" at Bronna Góra (pictured)?

Sounds perfect. Thanks, Cwmhiraeth. I'm adding an extra anchor also. Poeticbent talk 12:33, 15 June 2014 (UTC)

I think it will need another reviewer to approve ALT2. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 12:45, 15 June 2014 (UTC)

For ALT 2. Well-written article. For clarity's sake, I concur what Cwmhiraeth stated about length, references and the article being new enough. Good work. Yakikaki (talk) 08:14, 19 June 2014 (UTC)