Template:Did you know nominations/Bill Aylett
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 00:51, 15 May 2019 (UTC)
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Bill Aylett
[edit]- ... that Bill Aylett, a member of the Australian Senate for 27 years, was the grandson of a convict transported to Australia for stealing beehives? Source: "William Edward (Bill) Aylett was of convict ancestry, his grandfather, William Aylett having been transported to Tasmania in 1845 for the theft of two beehives" [1]
- ALT1:... that on the day Bill Aylett was first elected to the Australian Senate he ran over a voter with his car? Source: "In October, Aylett tried for the Senate. Despite the disapproval of the Burnie Advocate and the fact that on election day the car he was driving hit a woman on her way to a polling booth in Launceston, he topped the poll" [2]
- Reviewed: Zhou Tongqing
- Comment: Running this in the week before the 2019 Australian federal election (on 18 May) makes sense.
5x expanded by Ivar the Boneful (talk). Self-nominated at 13:51, 29 April 2019 (UTC).
- Reviewing
- Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, well written and well cited.
- Both hooks are eyecatching, short enough and supported by inline citation.
There is an issue with copyvio which needs to be fixed. Earwig shows 49% correlatation with first cited reference.Papamac (talk) 07:05, 4 May 2019 (UTC)
- User:Iainmacintyre thanks for the review. I've made a few minor wording changes and brought it down to 45%, but there's not much more I can do as the copyvio detector is mainly picking up quotations and proper nouns. Ivar the Boneful (talk) 08:01, 4 May 2019 (UTC)
- Still some duplicated phrases that could be reworded. Ideally the only duplicates should be the names and quotations. Happy to help if you like. Papamac (talk) 08:44, 4 May 2019 (UTC)
- With further rewording Earwig now down to 40%, but all of these are names or quotations.
- QPQ done so looks ready to go.
Papamac (talk) 13:40, 4 May 2019 (UTC)
