Template:Did you know nominations/Ben Everson

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 10:40, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Ben Everson

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• ... that English footballer Ben Everson played for Icelandic Úrvalsdeild team Breiðablik when they qualified for the 2013–14 UEFA Europa League First qualifying round?

• Reviewed: Michael G. Santos

Created by Mattythewhite (talk). Self nom at 19:47, 20 January 2013 (UTC)

Length, date, referencing and hook all fine. Spot checks on the refs revealed nothing of concern. No other issues with the text. QPQ done. Go go go! Moswento ^talky 13:51, 5 February 2013 (UTC)

• I've pulled this from the prep area, as I find the hook a little misleading and it might need a little rewrite. The hook should correspond with the article, and while the hook use the word "helped" the article says "played nine matches and scored 1 goal". You can call that goal for help, but I think the hook should be rewritten to something like "...played for when..." Mentoz86 (talk) 20:06, 5 February 2013 (UTC)
  • Reworded as suggested. Mattythewhite (talk) 17:02, 12 February 2013 (UTC)
    • Great. Good to go per Moswento's review. Mentoz86 (talk) 21:47, 12 February 2013 (UTC)