Template:Did you know nominations/Beegum, California

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton talk 16:15, 2 December 2023 (UTC)

Beegum, California

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... that when a state highway between Beegum and Peanut was vetoed, a newspaper accused their residents of lacking imagination? Source: Sacramento Union
- ALT1: ... that when a state highway between Beegum and Peanut was vetoed, the Sacramento Union suggested they rename their hamlets? Source: Sacramento Union
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Tjarda Struik

5x expanded by Cielquiparle (talk). Self-nominated at 06:00, 17 November 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Beegum, California; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

I'll review this. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:27, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Everything looks alright. Both hooks work, though @Cielquiparle: maybe change it to was vetoed, the Sacramento Union a newspaper accused their residents of lacking imagination – is the Sacramento Union an important enough paper that its relevant to mention in the hook? BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:43, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

@BeanieFan11: Good suggestion for simplifying the hook (thus giving readers more of a reason to click through and find out more). Have tweaked ALT0 accordingly. Cielquiparle (talk) 00:12, 22 November 2023 (UTC)