Template:Did you know nominations/Bandaru Dattatreya
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:31, 8 April 2019 (UTC)
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Bandaru Dattatreya
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Dattatreya in 2017
... that Bandaru Dattatreya was the only minister from the state of Telangana in the Narendra Modi ministry?Source: Indian Express
5x expanded by Royroydeb (talk). Self-nominated at 13:58, 10 March 2019 (UTC).
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- @Royroydeb:
5x expanded (922 on 12 July 2018 to 5079 on 9 March 2019), long enough, neutral, well cited, hook cited, qpq done, image is free and in article, image will look OK at 100x100. The hook needs rewording to cater broad audience. Readers would not know where Telangana is and what Modi ministry is. Keep in mind the international audience of Wikipedia. Write hook in such a way that anybody from anywhere find it interesting and understandable. He was a minister and no longer serves as one. So something more interesting would be a better hook. If you can not find another hook, I will approve this one after reword. Kudos for improving articles related to Indian politics. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 04:43, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
ALT1:... that Bandaru Dattatreya was the only minister from the state of Telangana in the present union cabinet of India led by Prime Minister Narendra Modi?
- @Royroydeb:
RRD (talk) 15:26, 23 March 2019 (UTC)
- @Royroydeb:, current Union Cabinet of India is a proper term and led by Prime Minister Narendra Modi is unnecessary. I trimmed and reworded it. Is it OK? He was a minister so if you can find another hook, it would be better.-Nizil (talk) 06:18, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
- ALT1a: ... that Bandaru Dattatreya was the only minister from the Telangana state in the current Union Cabinet of India?
- @Nizil Shah: I have no objection to the new hook. RRD (talk) 11:39, 27 March 2019 (UTC)
- ALT1a: ... that Bandaru Dattatreya was the only minister from the Telangana state in the current Union Cabinet of India?
- @Royroydeb:, current Union Cabinet of India is a proper term and led by Prime Minister Narendra Modi is unnecessary. I trimmed and reworded it. Is it OK? He was a minister so if you can find another hook, it would be better.-Nizil (talk) 06:18, 25 March 2019 (UTC)
