Template:Did you know nominations/Band of the National Police of Peru

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:27, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

Band of the National Police of Peru

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• ... that the Band of the National Police of Peru is considered the "official band of the Peruvian state"?

• Reviewed: Claudeen Arthur

Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 02:55, 5 February 2020 (UTC).

• New enough and (barely) long enough. QPQ present. Sufficiently cited article with appropriate inline citations; the source checks out the hook as well. Definitely not expected from the police! Raymie (t • c) 06:15, 5 February 2020 (UTC)

• Hi, I came by to promote this, but I don't understand why these common words are in quotes. The hook wording is also repetitive and circular ("band"..."band"..."Peru"..."Peruvian"). Yoninah (talk) 22:06, 13 February 2020 (UTC)

@Chetsford, Raymie, and Yoninah: Would this alternate hook be acceptable?

ALT1 ... that the Band of the National Police of Peru has the oldest music library in the country?

Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 01:05, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

@Narutolovehinata5: I'd be fine with it. Raymie (t • c) 01:11, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

I apologize for my delayed reply. I have no problem with it. Chetsford (talk) 01:13, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

• A new review is needed to check ALT1. Pinging Raymie. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 03:01, 22 February 2020 (UTC)

• @Narutolovehinata5: The rest of my other review still stands and I don't have textual issues. It's another citation to the same source, which says, "La banda de la PNP cuenta con la musicoteca más antigua y completa del país". That's enough for me to give it a tick again. Raymie (t • c) 03:12, 22 February 2020 (UTC)