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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:16, 30 November 2017 (UTC)

Balotsav

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Balotsav 2017 Logo

• ... that after 25 years, Balotsav 2017's venue has been changed to Vasireddy Venkatadri Institute of Technology? Source: The Times of India
  • ALT1: ... that after 25 years, in 2017, Balotsav's venue has been changed to Vasireddy Venkatadri Institute of Technology?
  • ALT2: ... that after 25 years, in 2017, Balotsav's venue has been changed to VVIT?

• Reviewed: Chaetodon zanzibarensis

Created by Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk). Self-nominated at 13:59, 10 November 2017 (UTC).

• New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done.

• The statement ..After 25 years, the organizers decided to give a break for the fest in 2017. At that point, Vasireddy Venkatadri Institute of Technology expressed its willingness to host the event for the year... needs to be rewritten as it doesnt give a clear thought of what you want to put accross.

• Let me suggest a new hook.

• • ALT3: ... that in the annual Balotsav of India, children compete in many categories including elocution? CrossTemple Jay 11:45, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
  • @Crosstemplejay: Thanks for the review. I rewrote the sentence, please rephrase if needed. I would suggest a tweaked version, ALT4: ... that Balotsav is widely acclaimed as International Telugu children's cultural festival? Times of India Please review the image as well, OTRS ticket may be verified soon. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:55, 17 November 2017 (UTC)
    • • ALT 4: ... that Balotsav is widely acclaimed as International Telugu children's cultural festival? Source:Times of India
      • Please review the image, OTRS ticket has been verified. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:58, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

• Image is OK. QPQ done. A closer may choose ALT3 or ALT4. Ready for the main page.CrossTemple Jay 09:38, 17 November 2017 (UTC)