Template:Did you know nominations/BHIM
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by BlueMoonset (talk) 07:59, 27 January 2017 (UTC)
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BHIM
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BHIM App logo
- ...that BHIM (pictured), is a mobile app launched by Indian Prime Minister Narendra Modi on 30 December 2016 to facilitate e-payments directly through banks?
- Reviewed: Arthur Daley (sportswriter)
Created by AKS.9955 (talk). Self-nominated at 06:37, 4 January 2017 (UTC).
By my count, this article barely meets the length threshold at roughly 1600 characters. Honestly, it still looks too short and reads/looks like a stub to me. Many subsections only have one uncited sentence, and the entirety of the "Benefits" section reads like an ad. There is also a Play Store link in the body of the article. In fact, much of the article reads like an advertisement; this is going to need lots of work.
- As for the photo, I would recommend cropping around the edges to include only the logo. The rest of the text is superfluous.
- As for the hook, I'm not sure what "launched" means. This is the same word used in the source here, but it sounds to me like he merely announced its release and was not an integral part of the app's development.--haha169 (talk) 05:33, 10 January 2017 (UTC)
- Despite two reminders on the nom's talkpage, none of the issues I brought up was addressed by the nominator even while a few were fixed by other editors. Even so, the article lacks citations, among other shortcomings. It has been about two weeks and the nominator has been unresponsive and I haven't seen much effort to fix any of the issues. --haha169 (talk) 16:47, 25 January 2017 (UTC)