Template:Did you know nominations/Börjeson-Forssman-Lehmann syndrome

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The result was: promoted by ~ Rob^Talk 06:45, 8 August 2015 (UTC)

Börjeson-Forssman-Lehmann syndrome

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• ... that Börjeson-Forssman-Lehmann syndrome is a genetic disease that has only been diagnosed in 50 people?
• ALT1: ... that Börjeson-Forssman-Lehmann syndrome is an X-linked genetic disease that causes intellectual disability, obesity, and growth problems?

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Name changes due to the Islamic State of Iraq and the Levant

Created by Keilana (talk). Self-nominated at 19:17, 25 July 2015 (UTC).

• The hook suggest an exact figure of 50 people whereas the source (and the article) state only approximately. The source was also published two years ago, so even if it were correct at the time of publishing, we have no way of knowing that the figure is still correct now. I would strongly suggest an alternative hook. -- KTC (talk) 19:59, 26 July 2015 (UTC)

• @KTC: How about ... that Börjeson-Forssman-Lehmann syndrome is an X-linked genetic disease that causes intellectual disability, obesity, and growth problems?

• ALT1 -- KTC (talk) 21:00, 26 July 2015 (UTC)