Template:Did you know nominations/Ashley Freiberg

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The result was: promoted by Coffeeandcrumbs (talk) 21:50, 14 June 2020 (UTC)

Ashley Freiberg

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~~... that racing driver Ashley Freiberg is the first woman to win a race outright at Daytona International Speedway?~~ Source: Ashley Freiberg opens with win: ESPNW
- ALT1:~~... that racing driver Ashley Freiberg is the first woman to win a race outright in the Continental Tire SportsCar Challenge?~~ Source: Ashley Freiberg opens with win: ESPNW

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Episode 1067

Improved to Good Article status by MWright96 (talk). Self-nominated at 10:51, 18 May 2020 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: GA - appropriately sourced, with a neutral tone of voice, no copyvio issues. Nominated in time, QPQ done, interesting hook. Good to go. I prefer the original hook to ALT1 but both are fine. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:17, 19 May 2020 (UTC)

Returned from prep per discussion at WP:DYK#Prep 1: Race winner. Can you try something without a "first woman" angle please? Yoninah (talk) 21:47, 11 June 2020 (UTC)

@Yoninah: I do not believe I can create an appropriate alternative hook for this subject for reasons that it would not interest the general reader. MWright96 (talk) 10:49, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

ALT2: ... that motorsport champion Ashley Freiberg does cyclo-cross, hiking, rock climbing, and skate skiing in the mountains of Vermont to prepare for auto racing events? Yoninah (talk) 19:25, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

@Yoninah: I think the new hook is an improvement over the original two. MWright96 (talk) 20:37, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks. Pinging @BennyOnTheLoose: to review ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 20:48, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

@Yoninah: I'm happy with ALT2. (I've checked that it's verified by inline citation.) Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 20:57, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

@BennyOnTheLoose: Thank you. We need another tick please. Yoninah (talk) 20:59, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

As per above. (@Yoninah: If this isn't what you meant, let me know. Thanks.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 21:11, 13 June 2020 (UTC)

@BennyOnTheLoose: Yes, thanks. Now the bot will move this back to the Approved page. Yoninah (talk) 21:25, 13 June 2020 (UTC)