Template:Did you know nominations/Arthur Rhodes (politician)

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The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 05:44, 15 July 2012 (UTC)

Arthur Rhodes (politician)

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... that Arthur Rhodes was the first New Zealand-born person to be elected to the New Zealand House of Representatives?

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Cakalang fufu
Comment: 5 times expansion

Created/expanded by Schwede66 (talk). Self nom at 09:15, 13 July 2012 (UTC)

Seems fine, though personally I would recommend the hook be slightly amended - see below. Recently expanded substantially well beyond five-fold. Article uses WP:IC and has no noticeable problems. The notable fact is cited to a 1922 newspaper article. Picture is out of copyright and used in article. The hook caught my attention, but I think it would make more immediate sense to non-familar readers if it said 'New Zealand House of Representatives'. I've amended this, considering it is fairly non-controversial. Sionk (talk) 18:47, 14 July 2012 (UTC)