Template:Did you know nominations/Anne Gunn

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 02:42, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

Anne Gunn

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... that in 1801, the Scottish inventor and music teacher Anne Gunn was granted the first British patent for a musical board game? Source: Raz, Carmel (2018). "Anne Young's Musical Games (1801): Music Theory, Gender, and Game Design". SMT-V. Society for Music Theory. 4 (2). (Videocast journal, URL https://vimeo.com/278344604 , event at 00:36 )

Created by BRobertson-Kirkland (talk). Nominated by Bonadea (talk) at 11:08, 2 May 2022 (UTC).

So, I've checked this against the criteria. It's new, long enough, and neutral. Everything's cited to books, so I can't check for paraphrasing, but, I can AGF.
I checked whether the subject existed, and found [1] - so, check on reliability.
Hook checks, but it's actually way understated. The source says first British patent for a board game, which is a much bigger thing. Since the point is a hook, I'd suggest removing the word "musical"? otherwise. Adam Cuerden ^(talk)_{Has about 7.8% of all FPs} 03:05, 15 May 2022 (UTC)