Template:Did you know nominations/Amy Wyatt

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:54, 25 August 2011 (UTC)

Amy Wyatt

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... ~~that Daily Mail journalist Jaci Stephen criticised fictional character Amy Wyatt for wearing too much make-up?~~

Reviewed: Rex Putnam
Comment: Inline cite in reception section

Created by Raintheone (talk). Self nom at 02:43, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

All checks out OK. The C of E. God Save The Queen! (talk) 14:00, 21 August 2011 (UTC)

The orig hook is misleading and by making Jaci Stephen sound like an idiot also violates DYK policy against negative hooks about a living person. Presumably the criticism of "Amy Wyatt"'s makeup was in response to the actual non-fictional makeup worn by the actress portraying Amy Wyatt on TV. I suggest instead

ALT1... that the actress playing Amy Wyatt in British soap opera Emmerdale has been nominated for two "Best Newcomer" awards? Sharktopus ^talk 18:01, 22 August 2011 (UTC)

If you'd prefer that hook - then sure, I'm happy to go with the alt hook. :) Though I'm not not sure how it makes Jaci sound like an idiot. Jaci was refering to Amy's make-up and not Chelsea Halfpenny. Halfpenny herself brands her character's make-up as being "out there".RaintheOne ^BAM 20:31, 22 August 2011 (UTC)