Template:Did you know nominations/Amis Music Festival

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 12:04, 19 November 2019 (UTC)

Amis Music Festival

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Dulan village elders performing at the 2016 Amis Music Festival

ALT1:... that Taiwan's Amis Music Festival does not publish its schedule in advance, to focus attention on aboriginal heritage rather than individual performers? Source: "Organizers do not publish a program schedule in advance of the event, as they want the main attraction to be aboriginal heritage rather than individual performers. Information posted online includes only a partial lineup and introductions to participating tribes such as Taiwan’s Bunun, Pinuyumayan, Paiwan, Rukai and Tsou, as well as indigenous groups from countries and territories like the Philippines and New Caledonia." [1]
ALT2:... that Taiwan's Amis Music Festival does not publish its schedule in advance to focus attention on aboriginal heritage rather than individual performers?

Comment: Note: I (HaeB) will to add an image shortly as well. (I went to this festival myself in 2016 and took various photos which I haven't gotten around to upload since; I am posting this nomination after I happened to notice on my watchlist that a new user had created this article.)

Created by Stonecoast (talk) and HaeB (talk). Nominated by HaeB (talk) at 22:00, 22 October 2019 (UTC).

Article: New enough, long enough, no copyvio problems. Article could be formatted better: maybe move some of the lead into a "History" section? Also, the first two tables should be written into prose, while the third's order should be reversed.

Hook: Formatted correctly, within guidelines, cited, interesting, neutral. The comma is unnecessary, so I would get rid of it to improve sentence flow.

QPQ: Exempt.

Overall:

Article just requires a little cleanup and should be ready to go. The image would be really helpful, looking forward to it! ◢   Ganbaruby!   (talk to me) 05:58, 23 October 2019 (UTC)

@Ganbaruby: Excellent feedback, thanks! I have now started to upload my photos and added one above. Per your suggestion I also created a "History" section and converted the first two tables into prose. I think the comma makes the hook slightly more readable by exposing the sentence structure, but I don't feel too strongly about it. I added the version without comma as ALT2. Regards, HaeB (talk) 01:48, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

@HaeB and Stonecoast: The prose looks good, and the picture added meets DYK requirements. ! I've gone ahead and removed a "the" in the hook/article that wasn't quite grammatically correct. The source link was moved, so I've gone ahead and fixed that too.

for ALT 2, and good work! ◢   Ganbaruby!   (talk to me) 06:11, 27 October 2019 (UTC)

Hi, I came by to promote this, but one paragraph and the material in the chart needs to be cited. Yoninah (talk) 11:58, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

@Stonecoast: Do you have references for these (the table with the yearly themes, and the paragraph about activities)? If not, we may want to remove them for now. Regards, HaeB (talk) 13:30, 11 November 2019 (UTC)

@Yoninah: I have now resolved the issue by removing the uncited parts for the time being. Regards, HaeB (talk) 11:56, 19 November 2019 (UTC)

Thank you. Restoring tick per Ganbaruby's review. Yoninah (talk) 12:02, 19 November 2019 (UTC)