Template:Did you know nominations/Altan Xire
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:54, 22 October 2017 (UTC)
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Altan Xire
[edit]- ... that Altan Xire the main township of a rural county in Inner Mongolia has an extensive urban skyline?
- ALT1:... that ...? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
Created by Muzzleflash (talk). Self-nominated at 21:53, 14 October 2017 (UTC).
While the article technically meets DYK guidelines on newness, length, sourcing, plagiarism, QPQ, etc., it doesn't seem that comprehensive: there's no information about the township's early history, for example. There are also some writing issues: "square km" could be abbreviated, "#172" could instead be written as 172th or something to that effect, and contractions like "hasn't" which is discouraged in articles. These issues however should be relatively easy to fix. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 13:14, 16 October 2017 (UTC)
- I made 3 of the minor changes you suggested. On the topic of early history, I'm afraid this is a difficult request as before the boom this place was literally a postage stamp sized town with a few buses, only known as a reference point for getting to the Mausoleum of Genghis to its south. So I leave it to future contributors to add early history. Muzzleflash (talk) 14:34, 16 October 2017 (UTC)
- In that case,
. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 15:14, 16 October 2017 (UTC)
- In that case,
