Template:Did you know nominations/Alpha Phi Beta
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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 06:51, 16 November 2021 (UTC)
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Alpha Phi Beta
- ... that Filipino fraternity Alpha Phi Beta has been involved in many instances of violence, including getting mauled by rivals Sigma Rho? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/KHXS
- Comment: COI with creator, although they are not main authors of article. Other editors probably have COI too due to internal university sources, but don't think venturing into that is necessary seeing balance in article.
Created by Alphaphibeta (talk) and Audibose (talk). Nominated by A. C. Santacruz (talk) at 09:13, 20 October 2021 (UTC).
Starting review: Article is big enough, and moved to article space in the time. I note creator is blocked due to name. A big unnecessary quote at the start of the history section is a non-fair use, and so should be cut. Otherwise appears free of copyright infringement. All the statements and list entries are referenced. In regards to the hook, the "many" appears to be original research. Without that word the hook is covered by the article with a reference, and confirmed on page 19 and 20. no picture. QPQ performed. so how about
- alt0a ... that Filipino fraternity Alpha Phi Beta has been involved in instances of violence, including getting mauled by rivals Sigma Rho?
- if @A. C. Santacruz: is happy with that or proposes another hook then I will come back here. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 11:13, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
- alt0a sounds good Graeme Bartlett. A. C. Santacruz ⁂ Talk 11:28, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
Also hook is short enough. So good to go with alt0a unless someone wants to review more Graeme Bartlett (talk) 11:58, 15 November 2021 (UTC)
