Template:Did you know nominations/Albert Heschong

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:22, 8 October 2020 (UTC)

Albert Heschong

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~~... that production designer Albert Heschong, who won an Emmy Award for Requiem for a Heavyweight, worked on over 2,500 productions?~~ Source: Variety: "Albert 'Hesch' Heschong, production designer of hundreds of theater, television and film productions — more than 2,500 in all ... In 1957, Heschong won an Emmy as art director for the TV production 'Requiem for a Heavyweight.'"

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5x expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self-nominated at 08:09, 29 September 2020 (UTC).

Withdrawn. I interpret the lack of review to be an indication that this wasn't very hooky. Cbl62 (talk) 01:23, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

@Cbl62: that was fast. We don't have so many reviewers lately. Would you like a review from me? Yoninah (talk) 21:29, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

@Yoninah: I was a little hesitant about this hook to begin with. Heschong was probably the top art director in the Golden Age of TV, but the hook is not strong, so I'm good with withdrawing this one. Cbl62 (talk) 22:06, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

@Cbl62: Really? You wrote a whole article and don't want a main page appearance? You just have to play around with the material to find a good angle. What do you think about:

ALT1: ... that Albert Heschong parlayed his childhood interest in model boats and Erector Sets into building huge stage sets, including a $15,000 Victorian house for ABC's Pulitzer Prize Playhouse? Yoninah (talk) 22:18, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

You're good at this. Love it! Cbl62 (talk) 23:00, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Thanks. Let's get a review going. evrik, are you available? Yoninah (talk) 23:24, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Cbl62, the nomination becomes aged after 30 days... I can do it, @Cbl62: have you done a QPQ? --evrik ^(talk) 02:29, 7 October 2020 (UTC)

@Evrik: I'm donating one of mine. Yoninah (talk) 11:24, 7 October 2020 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall:

--evrik ^(talk) 20:23, 7 October 2020 (UTC)