Template:Did you know nominations/Aharbal
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The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 21:15, 2 December 2012 (UTC)
Aharbal
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- ... that Aharbal (pictured) is a hill station in Kulgam district of Kashmir Valley, known for its waterfall?
- Reviewed: Bab al-Faraj (Damascus)
Created/expanded by Mehrajmir13 (talk). Self nom at 16:14, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
Well, it's long enough and new enough, but I have a few concerns. First of all, the article needs serious copyediting for grammar, punctuation, etc., and its tone is not nearly neutral enough. Second, none of the references are particularly strong: the only thing that's not a website is a travel guide, and not one published by a known publisher. Google Books gives a couple of hits that can verify the information in the article more reliably, and the development of Aharbal as a tourism spot is attested to in Google News and should be reflec'ted in our article. Drmies (talk) 23:50, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
- Have added some reliable references and copyediting done by my friend Yngvadottir. Hope it works. MehrajMir ' (Talk) 09:19, 27 November 2012 (UTC)
