Template:Did you know nominations/Afraid of the Dark (song)
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: rejected by Hawkeye7 (talk) 07:43, 15 November 2014 (UTC)
Though some sentences (there was a big run-on sentence that made no sense) have been copyedited, there are factual inaccuracies, things said without reference to a publication, descriptions that are advertorial and make absolutely no sense outside of the vagaries of the author. This is not ready for DYK. It should be rewritten.
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Afraid of the Dark (song)
[edit]- ... that the song "Afraid of the Dark" by Ejecta, which played on The Vampire Diaries episode "Death and the Maiden", has its overall Drive soundtrack style echoed from the Portland-based group Chromatics?
- Alt1 ... that the song "Afraid of the Dark" was called a "dancefloor beacon"?
- Alt2 ... that producer Joel Ford expressed hope about 12-year-old Vampire Diaries fans to like as well the song "Afraid of the Dark"?
- Reviewed: Tim Frazier
Created/expanded by EditorE (talk). Self nominated at 00:30, 2 October 2014 (UTC).
. Long and fresh enough. Those articles often have to be based on blurb related music magazine speech, but at least uses enough variety of it. Serten (talk) 08:04, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
This review needs more details, in accordance with DYK review instructions. Details that are supposed to be checked in a review can be found at DYK Reviewing guide. Yoninah (talk) 21:25, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
I would defer to the comments made during its two reviews for GA. It barely skates by on tone, which would need to be drastically overhauled. Though some sentences (there was a big run-on sentence that made no sense) have been copyedited, there are factual inaccuracies, things said without reference to a publication, descriptions that are advertorial and make absolutely no sense outside of the vagaries of the author. This is not ready for DYK. It should be rewritten. PanydThe muffin is not subtle 12:22, 14 November 2014 (UTC)
