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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:26, 28 September 2014 (UTC)

Abnormal basal metabolic rate

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5x expanded by 97198 (talk). Self nominated at 05:40, 20 September 2014 (UTC).

Short and sweet! QPQ, newness of expansion, directly supported hook, all good to go. But if I may be so bold... Maury Markowitz (talk) 14:44, 21 September 2014 (UTC)
Hi Maury, I like your thinking but the problem with ALT1 is that body temperature (e.g. fever) is completely different from environmental temperature (e.g. hot/cold climates)—most people in subzero climates maintain a normal body temperature and likewise most fevers occur in normal temperature environments!—so I think the hook is a bit misleading, as least the way it's currently worded. 97198 (talk) 02:49, 22 September 2014 (UTC)
With you, so how about... Maury Markowitz (talk) 21:17, 22 September 2014 (UTC)
Looks good, thanks. :) 97198 (talk) 04:58, 23 September 2014 (UTC)