Template:Did you know nominations/ASM-N-6 Omar
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:59, 15 January 2018 (UTC)
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ASM-N-6 Omar
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"Omar" air-to-surface missile
- ... that targets for the ASM-N-6 Omar missile (pictured) were put in a spotlight?
Source: "Omar...had an aft-looking light-sensing attachment, allowing it to ride a light beam projected by the launching airplane." in the result for Friedman here (unfortunatly the snippet view doesn't properly show it).
Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self-nominated at 23:34, 18 December 2017 (UTC).
-Prose size okay, AGF on source,QPQ done, hook needs refining as it is ambiguous and can be misinterpreted, How about:...that the ASM-N-6 Omar missile (pictured) was to be guided using a beam of light ?
The Bushranger — comment added by Force Radical (talk • contribs) 09:15, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Force Radical: Hm, I was going for a "last hook" clickbait-for-good sort of vibe, but that one looks fine to me as well.
- The Bushranger One ping only 09:59, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
- @Force Radical: Hm, I was going for a "last hook" clickbait-for-good sort of vibe, but that one looks fine to me as well.
Okay, then good to go — comment added by Force Radical (talk • contribs) 10:11, 22 December 2017 (UTC)
