Template:Did you know nominations/24th Arizona Territorial Legislature

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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 02:57, 5 April 2015 (UTC)

24th Arizona Territorial Legislature

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• ... that the 24th Arizona Territorial Legislature asked the United States Congress for a pay raise for legislators, noting that $4/day barely covered the member's hotel expenses?

• ALT1:... that the 24th Arizona Territorial Legislature made it illegal to employ females in saloons and other establishments that served alcohol?
• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Artur Ayvazyan

Created by Allen3 (talk). Self nominated at 18:32, 12 March 2015 (UTC).

• New enough, long enough, meets core content policies. Hook directly cited to RS. Gtg. --Jakob (talk) 14:52, 15 March 2015 (UTC)

• I looked around for the hook cites in the article and a) didn't find one for ALT1, and b) found a few typos in one section. There's also a typo in ALT0 – I changed "barley" to barely". I suggest that the reviewer read through the article to make sure it reads nicely. Yoninah (talk) 22:24, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

• @Yoninah: Redundant citation has been added in an attempt to overcome second reviewer's inability to understand how multiple sentences within a single paragraph can be sourced to the same reference. --Allen3 ^talk 22:35, 16 March 2015 (UTC)

• :) It's not me, it's the rules: b) Each fact in the hook must be supported in the article by at least one inline citation to a reliable source, appearing no later than the end of the sentence(s) offering that fact. Citations at the end of the paragraph are not sufficient.
• I read through the whole article and tidied up the grammar. Both hook refs are offline, AGF, and cited inline. Book hooks good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:52, 16 March 2015 (UTC)