Template:Did you know nominations/2015 Camellia Bowl
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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:03, 12 February 2020 (UTC)
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2015 Camellia Bowl
... that the champions of the 2015 Camellia Bowl, the Appalachian State Mountaineers, became the first team to win a bowl game in their first year of bowl eligibility? Coulson, David (December 25, 2015). "The Final Postscript From Montgomery And The Camellia Bowl For App State". College Sports Journal. Archived from the original on December 14, 2019. Retrieved December 14, 2019.ALT1:... that the Appalachian State Mountaineers overcame a 17-point fourth-quarter deficit to win the 2015 Camellia Bowl? "Scoring Summary (Final)" (PDF). Camellia Bowl. December 19, 2015. Archived (PDF) from the original on December 23, 2019. Retrieved December 23, 2019.
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Improved to Good Article status by Toa Nidhiki05 (talk). Self-nominated at 00:49, 1 February 2020 (UTC).
Date and length fine. However, @Toa Nidhiki05: what sort of bowl is this referring to? Cereal bowl or some sort of trophy? It needs to be made clear what "bowl" means the context in the hooks. QPQ done with no close paraphrasing. Just needs to correct the hooks as per Rule C2 of WP:DYKSG and then I can approve it. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 18:48, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
- Bowl here refers to the game itself. I figured linking to bowl game and bowl eligiblity would give a quick idea as to what these meant. Would this work?
- ALT2 ... that the champions of the 2015 Camellia Bowl, the Appalachian State Mountaineers, became the first team to win a college football bowl game in their first year of bowl eligibility? Coulson, David (December 25, 2015). "The Final Postscript From Montgomery And The Camellia Bowl For App State". College Sports Journal. Archived from the original on December 14, 2019. Retrieved December 14, 2019.
Toa Nidhiki05 19:04, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
It most certainly would not give me any idea if you just left it at that as, being British, I wouldn't have had a clue what they meant. The alt is much better and is cited inline so I am approving the new alt (which I have named ALT2 for clarity) only. Good to go. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 22:57, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
