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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle 18:14, 17 November 2011 (UTC)

2011 Halloween nor'easter

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Snow falling on autumn leaves

  • Reviewed: Simmy Murch
  • Comment: Not quite sure how to describe the picture

Created/expanded by Hurricanefan25 (talk), Daniel Case (talk), Hurricanehink (talk). Nominated by Daniel Case (talk) at 04:34, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

  • Date is good, length is definitely good. Lots of info here. I think the maintenance tag on the "Preparations and impact" section needs to be addressed; this should be split (perhaps just "Preparation" and "Impact"? I know, I'm a genius). There are a few bare url's in refs, and at least one incomplete ref (current ref #16 has no source identified). Other than that, looks pretty good. How about "storm in Walden, NY" for a picture caption? The Interior (Talk) 05:15, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
Will get to once my current busy weekend is over. Daniel Case (talk) 05:59, 13 November 2011 (UTC)
Made a stab at re-organizing things, not sure about the order the sections should be in. The Interior (Talk) 03:33, 14 November 2011 (UTC)
Nice work re-organizing things! It's needed that for a few weeks now. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 04:52, 14 November 2011 (UTC)
One another note, the CL&P bit at the end is over-covered. This could be condensed into a single paragraph. The Interior (Talk) 03:38, 14 November 2011 (UTC)
Also, the deaths in the tables don't jive with the text. The Interior (Talk) 02:22, 16 November 2011 (UTC)
 Done I have addressed these two concerns. Daniel Case (talk) 06:53, 16 November 2011 (UTC)

Hook fact cited properly, concerns addressed. The Interior (Talk) 21:35, 16 November 2011 (UTC)