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Japan: Cinema Low‑importance

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A couple issues

This is a good start to the article, especially that referencing was used. However, there were a couple issues that wouldn't all fit into an edit summary, so, I'm going to list them here.

The two plot summaries were copy violations, per WP:COPYVIO
the IMDb is not a reliable source (I left the award ref for now as I couldn't find an alternate), per WP:RS
Trivia sections are discouraged, per WP:TRIVIA
Technical specs qualify as indiscriminate information (maybe they could be worked into a Production section), per WP:NOT#STATS
External links should be kept to a minimum as well, meaning Rotten Tomatoes is good enough review-wise, per WP:EL

Seems like a lot but otherwise it's a good beginning. Doctor Sunshine talk 06:26, 29 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I've rewritten the plot section (just saw the film yesterday, so memory is fresh) and swapped IMDb links for more reliable refs. Robert Kerber (talk) 13:28, 1 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]