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About whitewashing dictators

@Grandmaster, kindly explain your edit here [1]. Your same style additions on multiple other articles seem nothing but a whitewash attempt of Aliev’s clear territorial claims over Armenia [2], [3]. The latter’s description is just something: “This is a personal interpretation, and original research. Saying that the territory is historically yours does not mean that you claim it now. Plus, in later he speeches he clarified that he meant no claims to territory”.

Guys guys listen, I understand, it’s not a “territorial claim” as Grandmaster wants everyone to believe, and it’s not like Aliev made similar irredentist claims over Armenia many times over the years, did he? [4] [5] [6]

Btw, Grandmaster also wants a specific source saying that this claim by Aliev is "irredentist" otherwise he just "mentioned" it according to them. [4]

I think it's pretty safe to say that Aliev's claims over Armenia's territory are in fact, irredentist. Again, given his history of those repeated claims, and how every time he mentions "historical Azerbaijani lands" when claiming Armenia's territory. No amount of recent whitewash by you or press secretary commentary afterwards [5] can change it. No amount of wording replaced from "claimed” to "mentioned" can change that too [6], when even the source says "claimed" |10.

You can't go around and add this sentence to every unhinged Aliev irredentist claims: "In a later speech Aliyev said: "We will remember our history, but we have no territorial claims to any country, including Armenia". Again, when someone has a clear history of claiming a sovereign country's territory, this addition just seems like a whitewash attempt, with all the minor details like changing "claimed" to "mentioned", or changing "by force" to "compel" like here [7], after yet another of his threats to Armenia's territory. The latter you were claiming was a "wrong translation", and which I had to cite you, a native Azerbaijani speaker, Aliev's exact quote in Azeri language |12. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 11:40, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

We do not add our personal interpretations. We only quote what reliable sources say, according to the rules. We cannot make our own interpretations, and decide, what is irredentism, and what is not. You need a reliable source to claim that something is irredentism. Aliyev clearly said that Azerbaijani has no territorial claims to Armenia. And Aliyev did clarify his remarks when he was asked about them by international academics. We cannot quote speeches selectively. He explained that when he said that Azerbaijani people would return to Armenia, he meant a peaceful return, i.e. return of refugees. [8] His spokesman said the same thing. I see no reason why we should not include those statements too. In general, the rules advise not to make personal interpretations of primary sources, but to find reliable secondary sources to make such interpretations. Also, please mind WP:AGF and remember to comment on content, and not the contributor. Claims of whitewashing, etc, are certainly not in line with AGF rules. Thank you. Grandmaster 14:11, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

But, Grandmaster, let's put our hands on our hearts and agree that the meaning that a sentence delivers will depend a lot on the words used outside the direct citation, right? No source might have called it irrendist (I have not searched myself), but equally what he said about "our historical lands" is at best tendentious, don't you agree? As what Aliyev said (and a lot of what Azerbaijani history textbook say) contradicts with the mainstream history, and if one doesn't make that controversy clear (by the fact of having downplayed it to "mentioned", instead of, for example, "claimed" as a medium between hard "irrendist" and formalist "mentioned"), then we are not, in fact, staying neutral, but presenting what he said under a better light than the lighting in reality was and giving some things that he said more weight than those statements actually deserve. If Aliyev said a few unacceptable things then one more politically correct thing he still said those unacceptable things and a healthy weight balance should me maintained, but false balance equalising them is not appropriate. It's a soft issue, but still - an issue. Apologetics, I believe, is the word - it is more scientific and politically correct then whitewashing. I have seen a lot of soft apologetics from Armenian editors, for example, in Khojaly massacre article, and I equally dislike it. We should avoid apologetics in Wikipedia, would you agree? --Armatura (talk) 15:05, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

In my opinion, Aliyev's statements are deliberately ambiguous. When he says that Erivan was historically Azerbaijani, and mentions an undeniable fact that the city had 80% Turkic population before it was conquered by the Russian empire, [9] it does not follow that he claims Erivan as part of Azerbaijan. He just refers to a well-known historical fact of the past ethnic composition of the city. When he says that Azerbaijani people will return to Zangezur or Yerevan, he only talks about people, and not the troops or Azerbaijani administration. In Armenia his words cause panic, and politicians use them for their propaganda, but in my understanding he just shows Armenian leaders what it feels like when someone talks about your country as someone else's historical land. It is quite a normal thing in Armenia to talk about Azerbaijani territories as historical Armenian lands, and Armenian public does not get alarmed when its politicians make claims to part or whole of Azerbaijan. But Aliyev shows them that this is a game that could be played together, while avoiding making any direct territorial claim. He only talks about history and return of people. In any case, "irredentist" or whatever is a label that we cannot slap on something because we find it appropriate. That would be an original research. In case of Aliyev, he clearly said more than once that Azerbaijan has no territorial claims to Armenia, and that any return of Azerbaijani people to Armenia would be peaceful, and not "on a tank". That clearly contradicts the idea of irredentism. If we quote someone, we should not do it selectively, but present the entire context of what he said on a particular topic, and he said different things. But better yet, we should avoid making our own assumptions and cherry-picking, and find a reliable third party source that would provide a good analysis. And it is not whitewashing or apologetics when you present accurately everything that was said, and not just a select part of it, it is objectivity. Grandmaster 15:45, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

I linked you specific examples to which you haven't answered. I'll ask again in a more detailed fashion: Kindly explain one of your same sentence style addition here [10]. Quote:

Following the 2020 Nagorno-Karabakh war, Azerbaijan's president Ilham Aliyev stated that Armenia's capital Yerevan, Zangezur (Syunik), and Sevan (Gegharkunik) were the "historical lands" of Azerbaijan.^[1] "We will remember our history, but we have no territorial claims to any country, including Armenia," Aliyev said in his speech at a conference in Baku.^[2]. I highlighted your addition, now kindly answer this:

How does your addition relate to the statement before about Aliev's "historic Az" land claims when

a) It's not a "clarification" on anything, at least not how your added source described it ("We do not add our personal interpretations" btw);

b) The quote in question that you added in multiple instances precisely after Aliev's land claims, is from 13 April 2021, meanwhile the statment in question here after which its added, quote: "Following the 2020 Nagorno-Karabakh war, Azerbaijan's president Ilham Aliyev stated that Armenia's capital Yerevan, Zangezur (Syunik), and Sevan (Gegharkunik) were the "historical lands" of Azerbaijan.", is from December 2020.

You were not even hesitant to add the supposed "clarification" in your words, when even your source from 4 months later doesn't make any connection to the initial statement and doesn't mention anything about "clarification".

And now you're here, lecturing your fellow editors how "Wikipedia operates" and about "personal interpretations"? I'm going to actually assume good faith and wait for your thorough explanation of this situation. Otherwise, you leave me no choice but to bring this to ANI's attention. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 15:59, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

To begin with, what those statements of Aliyev have to do with border crisis? What reliable source establishes a connection between those statements and the border demarcation issues? It was an OR to include them in the first place. And second, I just provided a source above [11], and here is the original full text, [12] where professor Michael Reynolds from Princeton uni asked Aliyev to clarify his statements about historical Azerbaijani lands in Armenia, and Aliyev said that he never meant that Azerbaijani people would return on tanks. As you can see, those statements are directly related, as the last one was a clarification for previous statements. And you are free to take content disputes anywhere you like, but content disputes have already been taken to ANI a number of times, and each time it was advised to follow standard dispute resolution procedures. So it is entirely up to you, I'm always ready to cooperate with admins to resolve any problems. Grandmaster 16:44, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Pardon me, Grandmaster, but looking at some edits of yours highlighted above, and not only the highlighted ones, I have to I ask a blunt question - what are your personal views on Aliyev? Multiple good sources call him a dictator and multiple good sources confirm the crude disregard for human rights, press freedom and free speech in the country he has been dominating for over a decade. I am asking this as the answer may explain why when you write sentences featuring Aliyev they may look to others as if you actually like him and support him in what's he's doing. That personal liking of him may result in presenting his speeches and actions under a slightly better light after passing through a personal prism. Regards, --Armatura (talk) 17:16, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Our personal preferences do not matter. It could also be said that someone's disliking Aliyev may affect their editing. I think that we should present information in a neutral and objective manner, in accordance with the rules, regardless of our personal views. For instance, it is of no concern to me what you or anyone else think of Pashinyan or Kocharyan, it has no relevance to Wikipedia. I may agree or disagree with certain actions or statements of Aliyev, but it is of no importance here. You rarely see me editing articles about any officials, I take very little interest in individual political personalities. But the issue of Armenia-Azerbaijan relations is a topic of interest for me, and I do my best to make the articles comply with wiki rules. Grandmaster 18:02, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Grandmaster how would you call what Aliyev did here - "explained"? or maybe "claryfied"?

[BBC] - Well, let me tell you President Aliyev, for our own BBC colleagues have seen that this is not hearsay, this is what was filmed, this was what experienced by BBC colleagues. They were in Stepanakert, in Nagorno-Karabakh on the 1st, 2nd and 3rd of October. They witnessed random shelling of the town, including at an Emergency Service Center, an apartment block destroyed. As people tried to flee there was a drone overhead. Shortly afterwards more shelling nearby. They characterized it as indiscriminate shelling of a town without clear military targets. Now this is not hearsay, this was witnessed and filmed by the BBC.
[Aliyev] -I doubt this witnessing. I doubt it.
[BBC]-Well, they were there President Aliyev.
[Aliyev]-So what, they were there. It doesn’t mean anything. That can be fake news. We had military…
[BBC]-And why would that be fake news? Why would any journalist go in there to sight to broadcast fake news?
[Aliyev]-Because of the biased approach to the conflict. Because of this black propaganda against Azerbaijan in international media.

Regards, --Armatura (talk) 18:39, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but what does it have to do with this particular article? Grandmaster 18:57, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Grandmaster A question about your general ability to write Aliyev's statements in NPOV style has been raised, based on your edits in this article (and similar edits in similar places in other articles), that's the relevance. Regards, --Armatura (talk) 19:52, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

That is already a personal comment. Please let's keep it to the topic. Grandmaster 19:59, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Ok, Grandmaster, no probs, where do you think it is worth discussing this general concern (that goes beyond this topic)? Would your talk page be suitable? Or would your recommend a third place? I would go with your suggestions. --Armatura (talk) 20:04, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

My talk page is good. Please feel free to take it there. Grandmaster 20:10, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Dear Grandmaster, I'm so very afraid, but you're not following what I said, again. I linked to you very specific examples of the one-liner Aliev's "we have no territorial claims" quote additions by you in places where they don't belong. No sources you linked make the connection between your addition and the sentences before that, about Yerevan, Zangezur and Sevan being "historic Azerbaijani lands" [13] [14], or the connection between "the Azerbaijani people will return to Zangezur, which was taken away from us 101 years ago" claim [15].

Neither they say that Aliev "clarified" his exact statements from December, which you word for word claimed here [16].

Your newly linked source, which has nothing to do with your previous edits, doesn't state the clarification of his 2020 December land claims either, unless you can kindly provide the exact quote.

Wikipedia is not an assumption or personal interpretation place as you said yourself, Aliev either clarified his statements from December or not. Also, a kind reminder for you to read or re-read WP:SYNTHESIS.

Moreover, I see that your first question, which isn't related to anything I said here to begin with, was already answered by @Jr8825 [|5], to which I fully agree.

For the last time, please kindly explain your rationale for those unnecessary and what seem like apologia one-liner additions in different articles, and your WP:OR modifications to what is written in the exact sources you linked. Regards, ZaniGiovanni (talk) 17:24, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

I already explained that there is a direct connection, as Aliyev was asked by Dr. Reynolds to clarify his statements about historical lands, and he did, stating that Azerbaijan has no territorial claims to Armenia. TASS refers to that exact same interview of Aliyev of 13 aprel 2021, which you can find here: [17] Grandmaster 17:47, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Btw, I found the text in English, and this is the answer of the president to the question of historical lands:

I understand that you in a very diplomatic way are saying that some Azerbaijanis claim that part of Armenia is an ancient Azerbaijani territory you mean me, of course, I understand. Thank you. Thank you for being so polite. Thank you for this question, because it’s also a part of manipulation in Armenia that I have territorial claims. No, I don’t. I can tell it publicly but at the same time we need to know the history. .... So, when I say that Zangazur is an ancient Azerbaijani land, this is truth. Zangazur was given to Armenia in 1920-101 years ago. Before that it belonged to us. When I say that Goyche, which they call Sevan now, is the lake where Azerbaijanis lived, it is also the truth. It’s enough to look at the map of beginning of the 20th century and you will not find Sevan there, you will see Goyche. The same with Yerevan. They destroyed the historical part of Yerevan. It is an obvious fact. Azerbaijanis lived there, including my ancestors. So, this is the fact, but it does not mean that we have territorial claims. Yes, I can tell you even more, maybe you know but don’t want to mention, maybe you don’t know. I even said that we will return there. Yes, I said that. But I didn’t say we will return there on tanks. I said that we will return. It means that why not. If we are returning to Zangazur corridor, if we are using the road, why should not we return to Yerevan? I think that the time will come and we will do it. So, once again, thank you for this question. It allowed me to make clarification and also to present my position we will remember our history, but we don’t have any territorial claims against any country including Armenia. Thank you.

Grandmaster 17:59, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Dear Grandmaster, this doesn't change anything and the quote was already available in your newly linked website [16] (you just had to switch to english). Aliev made several territorial claims over Armenia citing "historic lands" or "ancient Azerbaijani lands", starting from 2010 to present day [4] [5] [6] [7].

How was your addition related to the exact Aliev's remarks from December, you still haven't answered, neither it is specified in this newly mentioned quote. You're starting to repeat yourself I'm afraid. Please make the connection to his exact claims from December 2020, after which you added the one-liner quote in several articles. That addition gives the false impression that Aliev doesn't "actually" claim any Armenian land, which he did in the past mutliple times and still does, and again, nothing from this quote is exactly shown to be in relation to the following comments by Aliev:

a) that the capital of Armenia, Yerevan, as well as Zangezur and Sevan are the the ‘historical lands’ of Azerbaijan.

b) "the Azerbaijani people will return to Zangezur, which was taken away from us 101 years ago".

Yet you've added the "We will remember our history, but we have no territorial claims to any country, including Armenia" quote after all of those sentences [1] [2], including in this article [3].

I'm really trying to cooperate with you, but you still haven't made the connection to his exact quotes from December, and why exactly you added this much later "clarification" in the diffs I linked, assuming that it was in relation to his quote and still saying the same thing. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 19:00, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

I think it is all right there. Aliyev was asked to explain these exact statements, and he did. You might ask for third opinion, if you wish. Grandmaster 19:59, 12 June 2021 (UTC)

Oh dear Grandmaster, you know that we can't just say stuff out of thin air, "I think it is all right there" isn't an answer to my question I'm afraid. I actually went through your newly linked source and found the closest thing asked about Armenian territories by Michael Reynolds.

Are we gonna guess what he actually asked, or assume that "Aliyev was asked to explain these exact statements, and he did" like you just said?

Well, here is the part of the question regarding territories, by Michael Reynolds:

During the recent war some Azerbaijanis made reference to Yerevan and other parts of territory of today’s Republic of Armenia as being Azerbaijani lands.[1] [2]

Turns out, Aliev wasn't asked to "explain these exact statements", he wasn't asked to explain his December land claims at all. Michael Reynolds specifically said "some Azerbaijanis" when talking about Az land claims over Armenia.

So let me get this straight: Nothing was asked about exact Aleiv's quotes, not even anything specific to the December land claims (among many others previously), after which you added the one-liner "We will remember our history, but we have no territorial claims to any country, including Armenia" quote. And just recently, you've edited the article again, adding "when asked to comment on his previous statements" to that quote. [3]

Now please be kind enough and revert your recent change in this page regarding supposedly "commenting on his statement", and while you're at it, you should also remove the one-liner quote that you've misplacely added on different articles, including here. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 09:37, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Please read Aliyev's response. Reynolds in a polite way was asking Aliyev to clarify his statements, and he did. This is a quote from Aliyev's response: I understand that you in a very diplomatic way are saying that some Azerbaijanis claim that part of Armenia is an ancient Azerbaijani territory you mean me, of course, I understand. Thank you. Thank you for being so polite. Thank you for this question, because it’s also a part of manipulation in Armenia that I have territorial claims. No, I don’t. I can tell it publicly but at the same time we need to know the history. Grandmaster 13:00, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Aliyev was asked to explain these exact statements, and he did. This is your response to me and once again, no he wasn't. Your now provided quote is Aliev's interpretation of whom the question was referred to, the exact question about territories and whom it was referred was the following, again:

During the recent war some Azerbaijanis made reference to Yerevan and other parts of territory of today’s Republic of Armenia as being Azerbaijani lands.

@Grandmaster, I'm asking you one last time to revert yourself in this page, and in the similar articles with the same quote addition.

You're showing signs of incapability to remain WP:NPOV when it comes to Aliev and his claims. And again, I'm doing my best to resolve the situation without bringing this to ANI, but your persistent POV defense will leave me no choice. Kindly revert yourself on the articles, and spare us all from these endless talks. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 13:29, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

I think it would be best to ask for a third opinion at this point. You have your opinion, with which I disagree. And please stop bringing up WP:ANI. That forum is not for content disputes. There are ways to resolve content disputes, so we should follow the usual WP:DR procedures. Grandmaster 13:36, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

I think what many of us are forgetting is that Wikipedia is not a forum. We are not here to analyse what this or that statement can mean. As editors, our task is to contribute content regarding what has been said and not what it could mean, even if as people we all may have our own judgement or opinion about what this or that statement could potentially stand for. Unless there is a third-party reliable source claiming that country A is laying claims on the territory of country B, we are not authorised to make that conclusion, even if synthesising sources seems like an obvious thing to do. Wikipedia articles are not analytical pieces or blog entries. There are other platforms for that. Parishan (talk) 14:49, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Totally agree. We cannot just drop a line like "the Azerbaijani people will return to Zangezur, which was taken away from us 101 years ago", without demonstrating the relevance of this information to the proposed transport corridor. I do not see any reliable source making such a connection. Grandmaster 15:01, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Wise words, Parishan. Are they applicable to Grandmaster's synthesis in the sentences containing Aliyev citations that this talk section is dedicated to? And does that reflective "many of us" include yourself and Grandmaster? Or is it a case of Azerbaijani editors being deemed objective and POV-free unlike the Armenian ones? Thanks. --Armatura (talk) 15:08, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

It is an attempt to remind everyone that editing Wikipedia is a community effort and not a battleground between "Azerbaijani editors and Armenian editors" as you, very unfortunately, prefer seeing it. The no-synthesis rule applies to anything featuring on Wikipedia, as does the rule that exceptional claims require exceptional sources; and a country laying claims on the territory of another country is an exceptional claim, for which we are yet to see a secondary source (and not an opinion piece from a fellow editor). Parishan (talk) 15:20, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Let me repeat my questions Parishan, does what you say apply to Grandmaster's synthesis in the sentences containing Aliyev citations that this talk section is dedicated to? And does that "many of us" include yourself and Grandmaster? Stay focused on the topic and do not divert from the question, please. --Armatura (talk) 16:19, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

What I say applies to everyone who is participating in this discussion and resorting to synthesis, and I have developed my message below in response to ZaniGiovanni's clearly formulated content-related question. I see no point in responding to battleground authoritative demands to comment on things. Parishan (talk) 16:40, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

@Parishan I'm afraid you have to be specific. You chimed in into this discussion talking very vague, without providing any specific examples. And you're now citing WP:BATTLEGROUND, about which probably most people here are aware. You understand that is why we're having this prolonged discussion right?

Secondly, because you haven't provided any examples, I'm going to assume you're talking about this article (since your comment is in its talk page), and that supposedly there are "exceptional claims require exceptional sources" here. The only thing I could find related to your comments is this "adding that "the Azerbaijani people will return to Zangezur, which was taken away from us 101 years ago"".

The sentence is cited by the official website of the Azerbaijan's president [1], and here is Aliev's exact quote from that website:

"We are implementing the Zangazur corridor, whether Armenia likes it or not. If they do, it will be easier for us to implement, if not, we will enforce it. Just as before and during the war, I said that they must get out of our lands or we will expel them by force. And so it happened. The same will apply to the Zangazur corridor.

Our primary rival is time because the construction of a railway and a highway takes time. Therefore, all resources have been mobilized to implement this project. Thus, the Azerbaijani people will return to Zangazur, which was taken away from us 101 years ago."

Seems to me his quotes are fairy represented here, so I don't see what exactly are you complaining about. Next time, please be kind enough and provide specific examples of "exceptional claims require exceptional sources". ZaniGiovanni (talk) 15:35, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

I brought up WP:BATTLEGROUND because someone else has tried to profile this discussion as a debate between "Azerbaijani editors and Armenian editors", which is belligerent behaviour and should be avoided on Wikipedia. As for your question, the quotes are indeed fairly well represented. Could you please quote specifically the part where Aliyev talks about annexing part of Armenia's territory or, better yet, a secondary source that would interpret the above quotes as Aliyev advancing a territorial claim (and a territorial claim coming from a head of state is an exceptional one)? Given the wide representation of Aliyev's quotes, this should not be difficult. Parishan (talk) 15:49, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

The specifics are already quoted by Aliev himself, and provided here in this article (as shown by the quote above), nothing more nothing less. It's written exactly how Aliev said it and how it's presented in the official president's website. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 16:25, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

That was not my question. The discussion is about whether or not Aliyev called for irredentism or made territorial claims. You mentioned above that you "think it's pretty safe to say that Aliev's claims over Armenia's territory are in fact, irredentist". Could you please quote the part stating that? I cannot find the words "territorial claim" or "irredentism" anywhere in the article your are citing. Parishan (talk) 16:40, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

The discussion's main point wasn't about " irredentism " but this diff in question and whether it was misplaced or not [1]. The discussion also has long diverted from your briefly mentioned point. Please stay on the actual topic we're discussing now. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 16:53, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

In my opinion, the question is not about whether the statement is a clarification or not (we can spend weeks discussing whether or not Aliyev stating "[by saying] some Azerbaijanis claim that part of Armenia is an ancient Azerbaijani territory you mean me" and proceeding to talk about Zangezur counts for a "clarification" but we are missing the point). Why can this not be worded as "Later, when asked to comment on insinuations that the territory of the current Republic of Armenia was historically Azerbaijani and Azerbaijan might one day wish to take that territory (I am quoting directly from the article), Aliyev stated: (quote)"? Parishan (talk) 17:18, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

That would work too. If everybody else is Ok with it. Grandmaster 17:37, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Show me the direct connection between any of the quote additions here (every singe one of them added after Aliev's land claims), and his supposed "clarification" [1] [2] [3], then we can keep those additions. Otherwise, the question in that conference wasn't even asked as if he was the one claiming Armenian lands. And his perception that it was so is of no relevance to how information is presented on wikipedia. When the source clearly asks one thing, one cannot present it as another, and synthesize it to multiple quotes as a "response" or "clarification". ZaniGiovanni (talk) 19:35, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

The quote does not necessarily have to be a direct answer, clarification or whatever. It could be totally unrelated to his first statement. What's important is that it is related to the topic of Zangezur corridor, and therefore it is relevant to this article. I provided full quote where Aliyev talks about absence of territorial claims in the context of his statements about Azerbaijani people using Zangezur corridor and returning to Armenia. Regarding other articles, they should be discussed on their respective talk pages, not here. In any case, I have requested a third opinion from a person who was previously involved with AA topics. Feel free to ask for more third opinions. That is the only way to resolve this. Grandmaster 20:00, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Indeed. I already laid what I think of the addition here and on other articles. Third opinion seems to be the last resort. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 20:13, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Why is it so important in what context the question was asked? This article is not about Aliyev's claims, it is about the Zangezur corridor, and in both cases, Aliyev makes references to the corridor. In my proposal, I tried to remove everything that could suggest a link between the two interviews. Is there a reason why we are still on the issue of whether it is a "clarification" or not? Parishan (talk) 01:00, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Aliev made several land claims over Armenia from 2010 to present day. This has been already discussed. And his newly claims are relevant to the article as they are directly about "implementing the Zangezur corridor" and “returning to Zangezur”, and fit in the 2021 controversy subcategory. But when it comes to including random conference talk where he thinks the question was including him as the land claimer, and then he proceeds to actually tell that he has “no territorial claims” over Armenia, is something I’m not sure that needs to be included after his every land claim that hints at irredentism. Especially given his various land claims over the years, and how it can possibly give the false impression to the reader. In any case, a third opinion has been requested. I would also suggest for you to wait what they say, as everything has already been discussed in much detail and no conclusion was reached. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 08:10, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

I think we need to reach some sort of a compromise to resolve this dispute. How about we remove the following lines: adding that "the Azerbaijani people will return to Zangezur, which was taken away from us 101 years ago". In a later speech, when asked to comment on his previous statements, Aliyev said: "We will remember our history, but we have no territorial claims to any country, including Armenia". I do not see any relevance of Azerbaijani people returning to Zangezur to the issue of a transport corridor. This is more of a transportation related article, rather than an article about territorial disputes. And then clarification on what Aliyev meant when talking about returning to Zangenzur would be redundant. Grandmaster 15:32, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Who could've guessed that I have foreseeing powers :) Already explained above. Aliev himself says the relevance in his quote dear Grandmaster, please take a look. And I'm going to remind you again that the second part about "later speech" is your addition, which yes, actually isn't in relevance to the article or the quote. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 15:45, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Later speech has a direct relevance. Even the corridor is mentioned. I quote once again: I even said that we will return there. Yes, I said that. But I didn’t say we will return there on tanks. I said that we will return. It means that why not. If we are returning to Zangazur corridor, if we are using the road, why should not we return to Yerevan? I think that the time will come and we will do it. So, once again, thank you for this question. It allowed me to make clarification and also to present my position we will remember our history, but we don’t have any territorial claims against any country including Armenia. This quote has as much relevance to the article as any other. Grandmaster 15:51, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

@User:ZaniGiovanni, here's your Eurasianet source calling Aliyev's statements by their name - irredentism [18]. And another source from 2014, where he's making more explicit territorial claim on Armenia [19]. Noonewiki (talk) 17:43, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

Eurasianet uses very careful language, "hinting at irredentist ambitions there". It does not call it explicitly irredentism. The question here is why do we dedicate so much attention to those statements? This article is about a transport link. Grandmaster 17:54, 13 June 2021 (UTC)

References

^ "Aliyev lays claim to 'historical lands' in Armenia. Moscow, Yerevan react". JAM News. December 11, 2020. Retrieved May 15, 2021.
^ "Алиев заявил, что Азербайджан не имеет территориальных претензий к Армении". TASS. 13 April 2021. Retrieved 21 May 2021.

Response to outside opinion request

I've received a request on my talk page from Grandmaster and ZaniGiovanni to provide an opinion/try to mediate here. I'll first state an abbreviated understanding of the situation below, and I'll place some recommendations below a horizontal line. At least one of these recommendations proposes something that wasn't discussed above, so I'd appreciate if you could give feedback regarding if it would be an acceptable compromise in the aptly named section.

Some points from the discussion

An edit was made by Grandmaster in which Grandmaster added a quote (sourced from an April 2021 TASS report) in which Ilham Aliyev stated that Azerbaijan will both "remember its history" and does not claim land within any country as its own.

A few hours later, ZaniGiovanni began this discussion, taking issue with the edits made by Grandmaster on this page and other pages, saying that they seem nothing but a whitewash attempt of Aliyev’s clear territorial claims over Armenia. The editor provided sources that reported that Aliyev's comments about Armenia being "historic lands" of Azerbaijan. One of the sources, a 2014 news report from the Armenian branch of Radio Free Europe/Radio Liberty, opens with Azerabijan’s President Ilham Aliyev has again publicly described modern-day Armenia as “historic Azerbaijani lands,” saying that his countrymen will eventually regain them in addition to Nagorno-Karabakh and Armenian-controlled territories surrounding it. Two sources additionally provided are each from Asbarez; one was published in 2013 and one was published in 2016. Another source provided was a 2018 news report from Eurasianet.

Discussion continued, with the content-related portions analyzing what the sources themselves stated rather than what one could infer from the reporting. A few other sources were presented for consideration on the facts, one was a late 2020 report from JAM News, and one was an April 2021 report from Caspian News. Armatura also pointed towards a November 2020 interview that Aliyev had conducted with the BBC, though this appears to not be related to the topic in question and as a result was moved to the talk page of Grandmaster.

Later on June 12, Grandmaster added a second citation to the article itself, which was from an April 2021 Azerbaijani state media report that described this statement.

On June 13, Parishan joined the discussion, reminded editors that wikipedia is not a forum and argued that the laying of territorial claims on Armenia by Azerbaijan constitutes an extraordinary claim that would require an extraordinary source. Discussion continued, though a consensus was clearly not reached.

Generally, there was a lot of sparring regarding source interpretation, whether or not the edits (or the clame of irredentism) would violate WP:SYNTH.

Analysis and Recommendations

There seems to be some implication in the arguments made by ZaniGiovanni that the date on which the statements in the article by Aliyev (and the reports on the statements) were made would be relevant in a WP:SYNTH context when weighted against comments from 2021. And, it appears that the user is right in this respect—it would be a bit odd for a clarification on a statement made in 2021 to also be interpreted to apply to the intended meaning of other similar statements issued in 2013, 2014, 2016, and 2018. But it would be simultaneously just as strange to use statements from 2013, 2014, 2016, and 2018 (some of which don't so much as contain the corridor's name) to reflect upon a 2021 controversy; WP:SYNTH would certainly apply in this case.

The scope of this article appears to be a proposal for a proposed railway network connecting Azerbaijan's two pieces together. In this context, it would make sense to only consider sources that apply to the proposed rail system itself and to place general disputes over the land (including claims on the land) in the article for the region itself and/or the article on Armenia–Azerbaijan relations (or other related pages). Prior statements by Aliyev that were reported as staking claims on land are maybe WP:DUE in the background section of the article inasmuch as those claims relate to the purpose of the railway (which is to connect Azerbaijan), but they almost certainly don't belong in a subsection related to the (apparently ongoing) 2021 controversy.

On the flip side, the coverage of Aliyev's second quote publicly denying that Azerbaijan has land claims on Armenia is probably worthy to include in the section. I would avoid stringing it together with some of the linking phrases that have been proposed, since it's not clear that Aliyev was asked to clarify his comments for that particular speech. It's also clearly not the case that Aliyev clarified his April 20, 2021 comments on April 13, 2021; that's just not logically possible. In short, the April 13 sources are WP:DUE, but they should not be presented as if they occurred after the events discussed in the April 20 sources.

My first recommendation would be to engage in a reorganization of the contested subsection to be chronological in nature. In its current format, the Azerbaijani speeches are included in one paragraph, and the Armenian responses in another. In particular, presenting the information in chronological order might be better able to show the flow of the political situation within the controversy; currently the section lumps together quotes from several different months and doesn't do much to show how the controversy developed beyond attributing quotes to Azerbaijan's leader; Armenia's response appears to have differed over time, and the reporting that genocide allegations are now flying both ways in May appears to be (based off the sources I am seeing on the page and in this discussion) different than the discussion in February regarding the transport link. If we're seeing a change in coverage over time, especially if it's a rapid change over time, then it's probably not a good idea to lump things. It would also avoid the issues of trying to synthesize connections between events; simply stating the events that happened in order avoids the issue of having us try to come up with ways to group the responses that aren't reflected in the (relatively limited) reporting from reliable sources on this.

My second recommendation would be to heavily use attribution, owing to bias and/or quality issues with many of the sources present. Many of the sources being used appear to be biased towards Armenia or Azerbaijan, and it's generally a good practice to attribute biased sources when they are used in-text, especially when the only other citation to back up a particular wikivoice statement is a primary source. And the reasons to attribute aren't limited to Armenian and Azeri sources; TASS is yellow on WP:RSP owing to deficiencies in the reliability of Tass's reporting when it isn't reporting on the Russian Government's own statements, and we should probably use in-text attributions for it as well. — Mikehawk10 (talk) 02:08, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

My third recommendation would be to use reliable sources presented in this discussion to improve other articles. As I mentioned above, there were a lot of sources discussed that weren't in the scope of this article, but they nonetheless contain valuable information regarding an aspect of the land dispute between the two countries.

Feedback

Thank you to the editors who have been participating for their long conversation. I understand that this is a tense topic that brings up strong emotions in a lot of editors, and I'd ask that you all continue to treat each other civilly and act in good faith. I've tried my best to craft something here, and I know the recommendation of totally rewriting the section to go in chronological order is something that wasn't touched upon in discussion, but I think it would resolve the dispute going on above. If you'd be willing to give feedback and/or if you would like to propose tweaks, then I'd welcome it. — Mikehawk10 (talk) 02:08, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks a lot, that was very helpful. Just one observation. I don't see that Aliyev ever said that Azerbaijan would regain territories in Armenia. What he actually said was that Yerevan and Zangezur were historical Azerbaijani territories, where Azerbaijani people used to live, and that Azerbaijani people would return there. It is not the same as saying "we will take those lands by force". My understanding of these statements is that he was talking about return of refugees. In any case, it is not our business here to give personal interpretations, we just need to accurately present the facts in order for the reader to make his own judgement. And you are right about April 13 and April 21 statements. After Aliyev said April 13 that Azerbaijan has no territorial claims, responding to a question from an American academic, he said on April 21 that Azerbaijani people would return to Zangezur. But note that he was talking only about people, even though Turan agency put Azerbaijan in the header. I would rather use the official text from president's website, than the text from Turan. And I agree that different statements need to be presented in a chronological order. Grandmaster 09:17, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

We already had this discussion Grandmaster Talk:2021 Armenia–Azerbaijan border crisis#Question. And Turan agency is quoting president's website, which I also showed you in the discussion.

We are implementing the Zangazur corridor, whether Armenia likes it or not. If they do, it will be easier for us to implement, if not, we will enforce it. Just as before and during the war, I said that they must get out of our lands or we will expel them by force. And so it happened. The same will apply to the Zangazur corridor.

Our primary rival is time because the construction of a railway and a highway takes time. Therefore, all resources have been mobilized to implement this project. Thus, the Azerbaijani people will return to Zangazur, which was taken away from us 101 years ago.

Again, he clearly talks about how he'll "enforce" the corridor if Armenia doesn't want it. Please, don't bring already discussed topics in an attempt to change something. You were also asking about the inclusion of this quote in 2021 Armenia–Azerbaijan border crisis to another editor, which they also advised you to in fact, be included User talk:Jr8825#Another feedback request. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 09:33, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Indeed, Jr8825 advised to include quotes from Aliyev, which I do not object to. The question is, which exactly quotes should be included. Should it be only the one where he said about forcing Armenia to open the corridor (and there are different ways of forcing), or his other statements too? Because when Aliyev said about having no territorial claims, he made that statement in the context of his previous statements about Azerbaijani people returning to Zangezur (which he repeated later), and using the corridor. It was not an isolated statement, even though it may look like that in the article. Quote: I even said that we will return there. Yes, I said that. But I didn’t say we will return there on tanks. I said that we will return. It means that why not. If we are returning to Zangazur corridor, if we are using the road, why should not we return to Yerevan? I think that the time will come and we will do it. So, once again, thank you for this question. It allowed me to make clarification and also to present my position we will remember our history, but we don’t have any territorial claims against any country including Armenia. As you can see, it is not an unrelated statement, it was made in the context of creating the transport corridor, and return of refugees, but with no territorial claims. That is why I think it is relevant to the topic of this article. Grandmaster 16:14, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Grandmaster, I'm afraid that after all this talk, you just don't want to listen to the other side. Ever heard of the phrase "actions speak louder than words"? It's one thing what Aliev said once in a PR press conference, it's absolutely another what he said multiple times during all these years including in 2020 and 2021, and what he actually does. Do you think cherry picking and putting that quote after his every "historical land" or "ancient land" claim (and I'm quoting the sources), shows the actual reality of the situation to the article reader, and what Aliev does in reality after his press conferences and "clarifications"?

There are already Azerbaijani troops in Armenian territory, which I'm sure you're aware of Lake Sev#2021 Armenia–Azerbaijan border crisis, and you think we should argue whether Aliev's random PR quote has any relevance to his land claims, when in reality he did the actual opposite of what he said this one time (surprise surprise btw, no one saw that coming [4] [5] [6] [7] [8])? Are you being serious right now, even after all the talks and explanations? And please, don't ever repeat the "refugees" line, for god's sake Grandmaster, this isn't Aliev's PR website. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 17:11, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

I don't think there is a general consensus among reliable sources to connect Zangezur corridor with border issues. The parties use different maps, which is why there is some tension. But there are plans to create a commission on demarcation, with Russian mediation, which apparently will start work after the elections in Armenia. But that is a different topic, for another article. And please don't tell me what to say, and what not. That is something I decide myself. Please keep your comments on content, not the contributor. Thank you. Grandmaster 21:09, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

@Mikehawk10 thank you for your thorough analysis. For the record, I'm not proposing to include any of these claims [4] [5] [6] [7] by Aliev from the past, I was just showing a continual chronic behavior from Aliev. My problem is as you said with the inclusion of him "not having a land claims over Armenia" after sentences it is misplacely added and synthesized. And my second problem is, that it would give the false impression to the reader that Aliev *actually* has no land claims over Armenia, meanwhile Azerbaijan already infiltrated parts of Armenia, most recent example Lake Sev#2021 Armenia–Azerbaijan border crisis.

Hope my position is more clear now. Regards, ZaniGiovanni (talk) 09:23, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Speaking of timeline, I see that comments of Aliyev from April are out of order, but comments from the Armenian side, except for one, are all from May and June. If we mix them in chronological order, one comment from Armenian side of February should go directly after the first quote statement of Aliyev, but the rest will probably go after. Do I get the chronology right? Grandmaster 21:19, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

I think quotes take too much space, it is better to summarize them in a concise manner. This is my brief summary of Aliyev's statements: Azerbaijani President Ilham Aliyev stated in February 2021 that the ceasefire agreement contained a special provision on the establishment of the Nakhichevan corridor. On 13 April, Aliyev declared that Azerbaijani people would return to Armenia (Yerevan and Zangezur), but his country had no territorial claims, and on 21 April he stated that if Armenia would not agree to provide the corridor, Azerbaijan would enforce it (or force it). Is this a correct summary? Grandmaster 21:33, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

A few things regarding how to summarize the April 20 quote, in particular:

The relevant quote, as translated on Aliyev's Presidential website post from April 20 is The creation of the Zangazur corridor fully corresponds to our future national and historical interests. We are implementing the Zangazur corridor, whether Armenia likes it or not. If they do, it will be easier for us to implement, if not, we will enforce it. Just as before and during the war, I said that they must get out of our lands or we will expel them by force. And so it happened. The same will apply to the Zangazur corridor. Our primary rival is time because the construction of a railway and a highway takes time. Therefore, all resources have been mobilized to implement this project. Thus, the Azerbaijani people will return to Zangazur, which was taken away from us 101 years ago.

The relevant quote, as translated by Turan appears to be The creation of the Zangezur corridor fully meets our national, historical and future interests. We are implementing the Zangezur Corridor, whether Armenia wants it or not. If she wants, we will solve this issue easier, if she does not want, we will solve it by force,.. Just as before and during the war, I said that they must free themselves from our lands, or we will expel them by force. And so it happened. The same will be the fate of the Zangezur corridor. ... Our main rival is time, because the construction of a railway and a highway takes time. Therefore, all forces have been mobilized to implement this project. Thus, the Azerbaijani people will return to Zangezur, which was taken away from us 101 years ago.

The original language source appears to be Zəngəzur dəhlizinin yaradılması bizim milli, tarixi və gələcək maraqlarımıza tam cavab verir. Biz Zəngəzur dəhlizini icra edəcəyik, Ermənistan bunu istəsə də, istəməsə də. İstəsə, daha asan həll edəcəyik, istəməsə də zorla həll edəcəyik. Necə ki, mən müharibədən əvvəl və müharibə dövründə demişdim ki, bizim torpağımızdan öz xoşunuzla rədd olun, yoxsa sizi zorla çıxaracağıq. Belə də oldu. Zəngəzur dəhlizinin taleyi də eyni olacaq.

I am relying on a machine translation to pick the relevant part of the sentence here, so an editor who can speak Azerbaijani might be useful in determining what that phrase actually means. The two diverge a bit; the President's website seems to flow a lot more like natural English, while it appears to be the case that Turan is providing a more literal translation, as far as I can tell. (Though, as I do not speak the language, I could well be wrong here). Other secondary sources referencing the speech (Asbarez, ARKA, TASS, JAM News, Open Caucasus Media (OC Media), [Chatam House] referencing OC Media, etc.) seem to translate it as containing the phrase "by force" rather than "enforce", and they tend to frame it (generally) as a threat. Since this appears to be how media generally have reported it (including both Azeri and Armenian media), it seems that this probably the way to go. In this case, my recommendation would be:

In February 2021, a dispute arose around the meaning of a clause in the 2020 Nagorno-Karabakh ceasefire agreement that says that "[a]ll economic and transport connections in the region shall be unblocked." Azerbaijani President Ilham Aliyev said in February 2021 that the ceasefire agreement contained a special provision on the establishment of the Nakhichevan corridor. Armenia responding by contesting this, saying that the ceasefire agreement does not contain any provisions for the establishment of any such corridors.

On 13 April, Aliyev said that Azerbaijani people would return to what he described as Azerbaijan's "historic lands" within the borders of Armenia, but that Azerbaijan does not have territorial claims in any foreign country.

On 21 April, Aliyev said that Azerbaijan would establish the Zangezur corridor through the use of force if Armenia would not accede to the creation of the corridor. The Armenian foreign ministry responded to stating that Armenia would "take all necessary measures to defend its sovereignty and territorial integrity."

There also appear to have been developments in May that I am not an expert on here; they probably could be made into their own paragraph. And, obviously, the above lacks citations but they can easily be pulled in from the links on this talk page and/or the article itself. — Mikehawk10 (talk) 01:39, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Zor means force in Azerbaijani. So enforce it or force it are both correct. But I think we should go with the official source, which is president's website, because direct quotation is always more accurate than interpretations. So it should be "we will enforce it". Otherwise, you summary of events is accurate, and I agree with it. Grandmaster 14:12, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Zor indeed means both, and president's website also uses mechanical translation. In that case, if it means both, we should use the one which is mostly reported. I agree with the initial assessment of @Mikehawk10, using "by force" or "through the use of force". ZaniGiovanni (talk) 14:21, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

When it comes to the size of the summary, I'm still not sure. Will think about it and reply later. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 14:33, 16 June 2021 (UTC)

Normally we should stick to the official source. But I hope Mikehawk10 will help us decide which translation to use. Grandmaster 13:50, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

I expressed my opinion regarding mechanical translations, and to use what’s mostly reported (as it means both). MikeHawk already suggested their version of the text. I have some suggestions regarding the summary, but I’m quite busy IRL. Will reply here as soon as the time allows. Regards, ZaniGiovanni (talk) 14:05, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Good to have an external assessment (many thanks Mikehawk10!) but I disagree with the timeline suggestions - there is not much that would not fit in a single summary paragraph for statements from each side. Extensive Aliyev's statements about NK and Armenia can go to the appropriate place: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ilham_Aliyev#Statements_about_Armenia_and_Nagorno-Karabakh. --Armatura (talk) 21:38, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

He actually did not say much, if we summarize to keep the essence, it is just a couple of lines. That is why I propose to make a short summary, rather than get the article bloated with miscellaneous quotes. The same could be done about the Armenian position. Grandmaster 21:47, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

If direct speech - > indirect speech conversion is not going to change the meaning then I would not mind in indirect narrative of what they said. When Aliyev's (or Pashinyan or whoever) says something that is not true or is only partially true (comparing to original source they refer to), then it should be highlighted to the reader's eye by using "claimed" or "alleged" instead of just stated / said. Nakhchivan corridor should be inside "" marks as it's not a universally accepted or understood concept, the contradiction between contradicting political statements (like the ones Aliyev made 1 weeks apart from each other) should be also made visible by using whereas or however transition words, so it's clear that he's changed his tone, and so on. --Armatura (talk) 22:03, 15 June 2021 (UTC)

Versions for corridor controversy

Here are my two cents and as the thread above is TLTR I took the liberty of collecting all suggested versions in one place. The corridor is in quote marks as it is a so-called corridor not an established term. As Armenian's PM rating is shattered after the war and elections are being held in a few days to see whether he can still represent Armenian peoples internationally, I included that opposition is also against the "corridor" logic. I think it's important to include that Armenia is against that logic but not to unblocking transport connections - it wants free movement of cargo but does not want to lose it's sovereignty (which is threatened by Turanist/Gobleist concept of "corridor": it is not a coincidence that Aliyev keeps using "corridor" instead of following the ceasefire agreement wording. I also included a sentence on 11 January trilateral meeting as it formed the joint committees actually implementing the agreement points - and they discussed no corridor, to show that the "corridor fever" started after January 2021. It's useful to scale the timeline by months, rather than days, just showing the distance in between if it's something within a month, to have some sense of editorial instead of a chain of precisely dated news reports. As for the force threat, the presidential website says "we will enforce it" "they must get out of our lands" or "we will expel them by force" and that the same applies to the Zangazur corridor - it appears there is consensus in secondary sources that he indeed threatened by use of force so I it is okay to say "use of force" I think - he was quite unequivocal in that aggressive statement, deviating from his usually ambiguous style. --Armatura (talk) 14:05, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Armatura's version

In January 2021 trilateral meeting of Russian, Azerbaijani and Armenian leaders, Russian President Vladimir Putin emphasized the issue of opening economic, commercial and transportation links and borders, announcing that a joint working group under the chairmanship of the deputy prime ministers of these countries is formed to work on it 1. In February 2021, a dispute arose around the meaning of a clause in the 2020 Nagorno-Karabakh ceasefire agreement that says that "all economic and transport connections in the region shall be unblocked." Azerbaijani President Ilham Aliyev declared that the ceasefire agreement contained a special provision on the establishment of the “Nakhichevan corridor”. Armenian government and opposition rejected this claim emphasizing that the ceasefire agreement did not contain any provisions for establishing such “corridor”. In April 2021, Aliyev announced that Azerbaijani people would return to what he described as Azerbaijan's "historic lands" within the borders of Armenia, but that Azerbaijan does not have territorial claims to any foreign country. However, a week later, he warned that Azerbaijan would establish the "Zangezur corridor" through the use of force if Armenia would not accede to the creation of the corridor. The Armenian foreign ministry responded that the country would "take all necessary measures to defend its sovereignty and territorial integrity." In May 2021, Armenian Prime Minister Nikol Pashinyan said that while Armenia is not willing to discuss 'corridor logic’, it is keen on opening transport links as it means direct railway communication with Iran and Russia.

Grandmaster's version

Azerbaijani President Ilham Aliyev stated in February 2021 that the ceasefire agreement contained a special provision on the establishment of the Nakhichevan corridor. On 13 April, Aliyev declared that Azerbaijani people would return to Armenia (Yerevan and Zangezur), but his country had no territorial claims, and on 21 April he stated that if Armenia would not agree to provide the corridor, Azerbaijan would enforce it (or force it).

Mikehawk10's version

In February 2021, a dispute arose around the meaning of a clause in the 2020 Nagorno-Karabakh ceasefire agreement that says that "[a]ll economic and transport connections in the region shall be unblocked." Azerbaijani President Ilham Aliyev said in February 2021 that the ceasefire agreement contained a special provision on the establishment of the Nakhichevan corridor. Armenia responding by contesting this, saying that the ceasefire agreement does not contain any provisions for the establishment of any such corridors. On 13 April, Aliyev said that Azerbaijani people would return to what he described as Azerbaijan's "historic lands" within the borders of Armenia, but that Azerbaijan does not have territorial claims in any foreign country. On 21 April, Aliyev said that Azerbaijan would establish the Zangezur corridor through the use of force if Armenia would not accede to the creation of the corridor. The Armenian foreign ministry responded to stating that Armenia would "take all necessary measures to defend its sovereignty and territorial integrity."

What is a "corridor logic"? I think we should not engage in original research and talk about logic, etc. Corridor is a technical term for rail and motor transportation routes between the states. A good example is International North–South Transport Corridor. The use of the term "corridor" does not imply loss of sovereignty over a territory. But it is another thing that some in Armenia understand "corridor" as being something that violates Armenia's territorial integrity. In that case, we need to explain, who promotes such views, and attribute the statements to them. But generally, there is no such thing as "corridor logic". Grandmaster 14:46, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

Well, it's a direct quote of Armenian PM's speech (re-affirmed also today), not sure how you label it as "OR". When you say there is no such thing as "corridor logic" and "corridor" does not imply loss of sovereignty over a territory", these are your own opinions, and WP is not a place for editors' opinions. When you say Corridor is a technical term for rail and motor transportation routes between the states, it is your own interpretation, but not what others (Turanists, Goble) envisaged - a landbridge between Turkey and Azerbaijan resulting in the formation of a union between two states, with loss of Armenia's border with Iran. Again, the sovereignty concerns are what Armenia’s Foreign Ministry spokesperson Anna Naghdalyan and the opposition leader Robert Kocharyan and PM Pashinyan said, you can check 1 2, 3. The the "corridor logic" is already attributed to Pashinyan (the same way as the "corridor" is attributed to Aliyev) as you can see above in my version. Regards, --Armatura (talk) 15:06, 17 June 2021 (UTC)

I have no objections to your version, Armatura, and it's superior to mine. — Mikehawk10 (talk) 01:05, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

Many thanks, Mikehawk10, it’s mostly expanding your version with slightly contextualised language, borrowing ideas from Grandmaster’s proposals and ZanniGiovanni’s arguments, so if they have no strong objections or enhancements (after my clarification re: OR), then I’ll be happy to incorporate it into the text with relevant references. Regards --Armatura (talk) 02:23, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

I was going to suggest some tweaks like the inclusion of Pashinyan’s reply which already has been suggested in Armatura’s version, and overall, I agree with Mike and have no objections as well. Only a minor tweak like capitalizing ‘Armenian Foreign Ministry’. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 03:26, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

Need not include "'all economic and transport connections in the region shall be unblocked'". The controversy did not arise only based on that, but the article 9 and the sentence following it (which by the way should also be included in 2020 ceasefire agreement section) Dian Nikolow (talk) 11:23, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

I generally support Armatura's summary. If "corridor logic" is attributed to Pashinyan, then it is Ok. But Dian Nikolow also made a good point. The controversy indeed concerns not the statement that "'all economic and transport connections in the region shall be unblocked'", but rather the part that says The Republic of Armenia shall guarantee the security of transport connections between the western regions of the Republic of Azerbaijan and the Nakhchivan Autonomous Republic. What is the best way to reflect that? Grandmaster 14:47, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks, Grandmaster. We can 1) accept that that’s the main message of the ceasefire agreement article 9 and quote it, leaving the reader to see the following sub-statements in the ceasefire agreement article itself (I favour this as it still delivers the overarching statement in the appropriate context while keeping the section short enough to be readable) 2) remove the quotation of the agreement altogether (the section meaning will suffer though) 3) quote the whole agreement article 9 (though the readibility will suffer and we’ll be simply copy-pasting a chunk of text that is already wikilinked for those who want to read it all). 4) other options that I didn’t think of but others may come up with. Regards --Armatura (talk) 15:56, 18 June 2021 (UTC)

I think option 2 seems good, related text from the agreement is already in section "Current status of transport links : 2020 ceasefire agreement". Need to add "As agreed by the Parties, new transport links shall be built to connect the Nakhchivan Autonomous Republic and the western regions of Azerbaijan." to that, because it's in the agreement and is highly related. Dian Nikolow (talk) 17:33, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

It could be either option 2, or we could add a line "In February 2021, a dispute arose around the meaning of a clause in the 2020 Nagorno-Karabakh ceasefire agreement that provided for Armenia guaranteeing security of transport connections between the western regions of Azerbaijan and the Nakhchivan Autonomous Republic". That would explain what exactly was the reason for the dispute. Grandmaster 19:31, 19 June 2021 (UTC)

I support option 1, I would tentatively agree to option 2 if there was a consensus for it. Also, Dian Nikolow has done very few edits outside the talk pages of Zangezur corridor and Zangezur disambig, hence sorry if we don’t prioritize their concern. And not including the longer paragraph of article 9 was actually a third party editor’s suggestion, whom Grandmaster himself asked for opinion. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 09:12, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Why are you concerned about how many edits have I done? Is it because I make sense? I am not stricly against option 1, but more inclined to option 2 because in option 1 we repeat what is already mentioned from the agreement. I think with Grandmaster's modification option1 is better. Also need to include "As agreed by the Parties, new transport links shall be built to connect the Nakhchivan Autonomous Republic and the western regions of Azerbaijan." to the section "Current status of transport links / 2020 ceasefire agreement". How is this not relevant to this article? Dian Nikolow (talk) 09:34, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

I’m not concerned about how many edits you did or how “active” you are. In fact, I explicitly mentioned few edits outside of this page and in Zangezur disambiguation, which leans me to believe of one purpose account. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 10:44, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Well, I am a real person with one account only, and participate/edit/discuss the topics I am interested in. Which so far happened to be mostly those you mentioned. Best Regards. Dian Nikolow (talk) 11:12, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Please, stop attributing things to editors that never claimed them. I didn’t say you aren’t a “real person”. You might wanna take a look at WP:SPA. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 11:26, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

I didn't say that you did. I have other edits/interests in wikipedia. Thanks for the useful link anyway. Best Regards. Dian Nikolow (talk) 11:35, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Even more strange that you felt the need to mention that you’re a “real person” with “one account only”. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 11:59, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

I didn't feel the need to anything, and it seems you have no intention to put an end to this diverted-from-the-main-topic meaningless discussion in here, but I do, from my side at least. Here it is. Best Regards. Dian Nikolow (talk) 12:37, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

It is a meaningless discussion with strange and unrelated claims. So far, I was just addressing them, as you’re not owning up to your own words. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 12:42, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Regardless of how active an editor was, we are discussing ideas, not their contributors. It is just that I don't think there is any dispute regarding unblocking communications in general, the dispute concerns the actual route from mainland Azerbaijan to NAR. Otherwise, all political forces both in Armenia and Azerbaijan generally support the idea of unblocking communications. So if clarifying what part of the ceasefire agreement causes disputes is not acceptable, let's go with option 2. Other than that, Armatura's proposal is fine with me. Grandmaster 09:38, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

How about the following wording: In February 2021, a dispute arose around a clause in the 2020 Nagorno-Karabakh ceasefire agreement that provided for unblocking all economic and transport connections in the region, including that between the western regions of Azerbaijan and the Nakhchivan Autonomous Republic? Grandmaster 09:38, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Grandmaster, I don't mind adding including that between the western regions of Azerbaijan and the Nakhchivan Autonomous Republic but that's I think is the maximum the readers eyes will tolerate. I am going to be busy next week or two, could you add that phrase to my version and post, please, otherwise this discussion is again becoming TLTR and deviating from the topic. --Armatura (talk) 13:15, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

It sounds ok. Grandmaster, how about adding "As agreed by the Parties, new transport links shall be built to connect the Nakhchivan Autonomous Republic and the western regions of Azerbaijan." to the section "Current status of transport links / 2020 ceasefire agreement"? Best Regards. Dian Nikolow (talk) 11:12, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Strong objection, no need to copy paste chunks of text from another article and it'd be particularly problematic as long as this article is misnamed Zangezur corridor. Any equalisation of Aliyev's views of "Zangezur corridor" with the ceasefire agreement text will be objected in similar fashion. --Armatura (talk) 13:15, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Yes, let's please settle on what has already been agreed. I believe that the final version would be the best solution for this dispute. Thanks everyone for cooperation, and Mikehawk10 for mediation. Grandmaster 18:39, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

I introduced the agreed version into the article. Please check if I got everything right, including all the references. Grandmaster 19:01, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks, Grandmaster, for taking the task of implanting the agreed version back into the article. Thanks Mikehawk10 for putting efforts into resolving another convoluted AA dispute. Thanks ZaniGiovanni and Dian Nikolow for your input, may I ask you to check the cited links to make sure we have not missed / displaced any in the process of polishing the text? Apologies if I forgot to thank anyone who contributed to the re-writing of the controversy section. --Armatura (talk) 19:43, 20 June 2021 (UTC)

Thanks to everyone who participated, and especially Mikehawk10 for helping to reach consensus. ZaniGiovanni (talk) 13:09, 21 June 2021 (UTC)

Thank you all for this civil discussion! I'm happy we could get this resolved. — Mikehawk10 (talk) 01:10, 23 June 2021 (UTC)

French ambassador

This is what the ambassador said:

“I think the expression 'corridor' should be removed. The ‘corridors’ have left a very bad memory in the history of diplomacy, such as the Danzig corridor. We believe that we should work on the basis of the trilateral statement of January 11, signed between Russia, Armenia and Azerbaijan, which envisages the restoration of regional channels of communication between the countries of the region and their neighbors. France is fully prepared to work with the countries of the region to launch the region’s transport infrastructure”.

Nowhere does he compare "Azerbaijan's use of the "Zangezur corridor" to the Polish Danzig corridor. Quotes must be accurate, with no personal interpretation. Grandmaster 13:53, 1 November 2021 (UTC)

NPOV tag

Hello Armatura, why has the NPOV tag been added again? Super Ψ Dro 07:55, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Hi Super Dromaeosaurus, nice to hear from you, thanks for your message. I did not notice how/when you removed it otherwise would have re-added it earlier. As I mentioned in earlier discussions, the fundamental problem of this articles remains mixing speculative Azerbaijani propaganda (pumped in partly before the 2020 war and renewed after the war 2020) with ceasefire-agreement-sanctioned things. One might think that if that status quo is maintained for long enough it may become a new reality but it's not how Wikipedia should work. As long as this article is not depicting things neutrally to a lame reader, the tag should remain. It is also a generally good tradition for the creator of the article to leave the task of removing the neutrality tag to others. Hope this answers your question. BW --Armatura (talk) 10:52, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Is the article depicting things neutrally to a lame reader now? — Alalch Emis (talk) 23:29, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

quasi-irredentist claim

Neil Hauer is an extremely biased author, but most importantly, according to the rules, opinion pieces cannot be used for statements of fact, so to call the idea of a corridor quasi-irredentist on the basis of one opinion piece in not a very reputable publication is against the rules. To present something as a fact, you need to demonstrate that it is generally accepted to consider it quasi-irredentist, and one or two sources are not sufficient. Grandmaster 22:12, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

We can't just call it quasi-irredentist in own voice in the first sentence, that's certainly true. — Alalch Emis (talk) 23:24, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

I just removed the phrase saying that the Zangezur corridor has “different, overlapping, meanings”, the meaning is pretty clear, it is a corridor crossing through Armenia connecting AZ to Nakhchivan.Marzbans (talk) 16:48, 9 November 2021 (UTC)

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