Talk:Zack Fair/GA1
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Reviewer: DragonZero (talk · contribs) 02:32, 10 May 2013 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. Has an appropriate reference section:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
Issues must be fixed to pass. Suggestions are merely suggestions.Passing
- Pass or Fail:
Issues
[edit]- In the lead, "Originally, he was not meant to appear in Final Fantasy VII at all. " implies he was a created character but wasn't set in appear on that game. Reword
- Fixed
- First paragraph in creation/conception. If its the same source, source first sentence, than last sentence.
- Fixed
- "finding it more immature than they expected, despite him being younger than in previous titles." Aside from the double space, the comma implies that the second sentence is arguing against the reviewer's comment.
- Fixed
Suggestions
[edit]- "PALGN described Zack as an unfamiliar character in the series since his only appearances were in backstories". Uh, called instead of described?
- Fixed
- "When Ayaka finished the song "Why" for Crisis Core, she mentioned that she wanted to deliver it alongside Zack's fate "to the hearts of many people." Sounds more like it belongs in the Crisis Core or album article than character article.
- Fixed
- GamesRadar's AJ Glasser review at the end of Reception. Shouldn't this be in the previous paragraph? It looks like the paragraph before is where all the positive reception is.
- Fixed
- Ok, I fixed the article issues you have raised, thank you for reviewing it! I think it looks better, if you have any other issues, let me know! Judgesurreal777 (talk) 03:17, 10 May 2013 (UTC)