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Lianawongg (talk) 23:57, 8 March 2022 (UTC)Hello, this is Liana:) Thank you for this article, I found it interesting to read through the article as I have always been a fan of Sumikko Gurashi, yet I have not enough knowledge about the artist. I think it is a great article to have on Wikipedia, as a lot of the times the series or characters that artists have created would gain a lot of popularity while the artist would not be as visible, it is a great way to introduce the artist to the public through this Wikipedia page you have created![reply]

Your writing is really easy to understand and follow, as you have divided the article into parts that are clear to readers to read through it. The references that you have are great sources that provided you with a lot of information that you need. You have also introduced the background story of the characters, while also presenting the Japanese popular cultures, the kawaii culture and some other popular characters under the culture, which I think is a very good point to add, not only allow readers to have a basic sense of the culture but also getting to understand more about how do the characters are being created. One suggestion that I would have is maybe you could also add the brief story of each character that you have listed, as I think they each have their own background and narrative, or maybe you are planning to do that already. I would love to see more of the early life or early career of the artist, too! I am looking forward to seeing how this article would unfold. Thank you for allowing me to have a better sense of the artist:D

Wiki Education assignment: AHIS 320 Introduction to Feminist, Gender and Cultural Theory

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 11 January 2022 and 23 April 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): BrittanyAngelMa (article contribs). Peer reviewers: ENOZIW, Luiza Coulaud, Jdiazjirash, Kgn.wht.