Talk:Yugoslav destroyer Beograd/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:32, 31 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:32, 31 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the lengthy delay.

No DABs, external link OK
Image appropriately licensed.
No duplicate links.
Link the Bofors 40mm gun directly.
- Done.
I'm a bit dubious that the Beograd design was derived from the Simouns except in the broadest possible terms as the French design dated back to the 20s, was a 100 tons larger, 5 knots slower and had 3 times the bunkerage. Probably best to ignore that bit entirely as it doesn't pass the smell test, IMO.
- I'll accept your opinion on this, although it is pretty clear in the source. I've amended it to say it was developed from a French design.
in single gun shield mounts Suggest "in single mounts fore and aft of the superstructure, protected by gun shields" or something similar.
- Done.
Link shelter deck or nearest equivalent.
- Not sure what that would be?
two triple-mount 550 mm (22 in) torpedo tubes Howabout two triple mounts for 550 mm...?
Your account of her actions under Italian control are pretty sparse. Did she participate in any battle with Allied surface ships, sink a sub or have any ships in her convoys sunk?
- I haven't located anything that specific. I'm pretty sure I checked Whitley and there was no detail. There are a few sources available online, but I wouldn't rely on them.
  - See if you can access a copy of Jurgen Rohwer's Chronology of the War at Sea; there's one or two relevant entries there.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:20, 13 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
    - They have a copy at the state library, I'm be going there Monday, I'll take a look. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 22:47, 13 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]
single mount 20 mm (0.79 in) Hyphenate single mount. Do you know the model of guns used by the Germans when they rearmed her? If so, link them.
- Done, and no. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 07:13, 13 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:09, 12 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Where are we on this?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:11, 26 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Just need another day or so, RW got in the way of a visit to the library... Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 02:43, 26 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]

OK Sturm, there wasn't much, but I've added what there was. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 11:35, 27 October 2016 (UTC)[reply]