Talk:Yu Wuling/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 16:35, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:35, 20 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

1
1.a Y

1.b Y
2
2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y (3.8% is highest)
3
3.a Y

3.b Y
4
4.a Y
5
5.a Y
6
6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No Dead links Y
Images appropriately licensed Y
I will be passing the review now, and adding prose suggestions at a later date. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:42, 1 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Prose Suggestions

His birth name was Yu Ye; Wuling was his courtesy name. suggest His birth name was Yu Ye, and his courtesy name was Wuling.
His date of death is unknown suggest The date of his death is unknown
@Hijiri88: That is all my suggestions. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 13:53, 5 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Iazyges: Did the second one, but with the first one, while I agree the proposed wording is slightly more readable prose, I thought that when I wrote the sentence and decided against it specifically because the point was to explain where the article title came from, rather than simply explaining what his courtesy name was. After introducing him in the first sentence as Yu Wuling, saying "his courtesy name was Wuling" feels kinda awkward to me. Hijiri 88 (聖やや) 21:28, 9 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]