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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 11:58, 12 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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Oldest GA in the songs category so I will get through this one --Kyle Peake (talk) 11:58, 12 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Remove streaming since that is not sourced in the body
I will mention and source it within the body so that this can stay.
  • Length should be 2:36 instead
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  • Are you sure busbee isn't credited under his real name? If so, add under Writer(s) as Michael Busbee with the target to busbee still
Per the liner notes to YMIFLC, "BUSBEE" is credited as a writer and "busbee" is credited as a producer, not Michael Busbee.
  • Busbee → busbee under Producer(s) since his name is not capitalised
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  • Link to the video in infobox instead of External links
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  • "The track was written by" → "The song was written by"
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  • "was handled by Busbee" → "was handled by busbee"
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  • "Recorded during the summer months, the song title leaked" → "It was recorded during the summer months, with the title leaking"
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  • "August 2017 and was eventually released" → "August 2017 and the song was eventually released"
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  • "The single was influenced by" → "The song was influenced by"
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  • You should mention that Blake Shelton is featured + background on it for the second/third sentence of this para instead, but keep the holiday music sentence here though
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  • "elements with lyrics describing" → "elements, with lyrics describing"
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  • "received a positive to mixed response from" → "received positive to mixed reviews from"
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  • "believed that the track was successful lyrically" → "believed that the song was successful lyrically"
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  • "and would eventually" → "and would ultimately"
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  • "a modern Christmas classic while others" → "a modern Christmas classic, while other critics" with the appropriate wikilink
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  • "the song missed entering the" → "the song failed to enter the"
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  • "In countries like" → "In countries such as"
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  • "it became Stefani's first entry" → "the song became Stefani's first track to chart"
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  • "has sold 66,000 copies as of 2019" → "has sold 66,000 copies by 2019"
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  • "The song's accompanying music video was directed by long-time collaborator" → "The accompanying music video was directed by long-time Stefani collaborator" with the wikilink
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  • "with ones of them performing the song" → "with ones of the two performing "You Make It Feel Like Christmas""
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  • "performing the song accompanied by" → "performing the song, accompanied by"
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  • "looks in the video were reminiscent of" → "looks in the video were described as reminiscent of"
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  • "according to critics" remove it due to the new wording above
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  • ""You Make It Feel Like Christmas" has been performed on" → "The song has been performed for"
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  • "and on the 2017" → "as well as on the 2017"
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Background and release

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  • [1][2] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
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  • "she announced in July 2017 that she had plans to release new music by the end of the year" → "she announced her plans to release new music by the end of 2017 in July of that year" to avoid too much "she" uses
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  • "began work on what would later become" → "began work on a track that later became"
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  • Remove wikilink on You Make It Feel Like Christmas
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  • "summer months of 2017 after Stefani" → "summer months of 2017, after Stefani"
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  • "The latter artist teamed up with Stefani" → "The latter of the three collaborated with Stefani"
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  • "Busbee pushed Stefani to create a holiday album" → "Stefani was pressured to create a holiday album by busbee"
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  • "Stefani listened to her favorite holiday albums from her" → "Stefani listened to the favorite holiday albums of her"
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  • The EW citation should be evoked at the end of the sentence
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  • "the titles of several unreleased tracks, such as" → "the titles of several unreleased tracks from Stefani, including"
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  • "Because of their titles" → "Because of the titles"
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  • "may be recording a" → "may have been recording a"
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  • Remove target on holiday album
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  • "On September 18, 2017, the singer" → "On September 18 that year, the singer"
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  • "for the holidays" and would release more" → "for the holidays", and would release more"
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  • "she revealed that she had recorded" → "Stefani revealed that she had recorded"
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  • "confirmed the project's title as You Make It Feel Like Christmas, and stated that its" → "confirming its title as You Make It Feel Like Christmas and stating that the"
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  • "It was sent to music distributors" → ""You Make It Feel Like Christmas" was sent to music distributors"
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  • No citation for iTunes?
Adjusted – I removed iTunes altogether as the source I planned to use is now dead.
  • Mention that the release was through Interscope Records on the first sentence
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  • "It was eventually serviced" → "It was ultimately serviced"
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  • No citation(s) for the US/other releases that aren't Italy?
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  • Mention that the non-Italy releases were through "the aforementioned label" and the Italy one was through Universal Music Group
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  • Remove wikilink on lead single
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  • "handled by" → "serviced through"
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  • Remove wikilink on Universal Music Group
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  • "In a seasonal promotional campaign for the" → "For a seasonal promotional campaign of the"
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Composition and lyrics

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  • Img looks good
Sounds good
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  • Remove target on Christmas song
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  • "described the single as a blend" → "described the song as a blend"
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  • "incorporating both the" → "incorporating elements from both the"
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  • "rather than the latter" → "more than the latter"
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  • "Agreeing that the song has" → "Echoing the view that the song has"
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  • Noisey should be wikilinked to itself and not italicised
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  • Target Yuletide to Yule
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  • "as headed into" → "as heading into"
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  • Remove target on beats per minute
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  • "it advances in the chord progressions" → "the vocal range advances in the chord progressions"
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  • "The song was produced by Busbee" → "The song was produced by busbee" and this sentence with the following ones of this para belongs in the first section
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  • "by Valentine" → "by the latter"
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  • "whereas Busbee and Dave Way served as" → "whereas busbee and Dave Way were"
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  • "engineers with assistance from" → "engineers, with assistance from"
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  • "for the track with arrangements" → "for the track, with arrangements"
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  • "The first verse belongs to Shelton" → "The first verse is performed by Shelton"
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  • "who sings "I wanna" → "who sings, "I wanna"
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  • "how she thought she "was" → "how she thought she 'was"
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  • "love had died";" → "love had died'";"
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  • Wikilink Christmas to itself in the sentence that follows the above
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  • "The couple discusses love and name-drops" → "The couple discuss on love and name-drop"
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Critical reception

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  • "Regarding Shelton's featured role" → "Regarding Shelton's feature"
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  • "and found it to be an obvious inclusion on Stefani's album due to their" → "and an obvious inclusion on You Make It Feel Like Christmas due to the"
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  • "was equally positive" → "was similarly positive" since this is more neutral
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  • "suggesting that Stefani and Shelton's track" → "suggesting that it"
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  • "Noisey's Ross was critical of the single's" → "Ross was critical of the single's"
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  • "in his 2017 article" → "for his 2017 article"
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  • "however, he used their duet as" → "however, he used "You Make It Feel Like Christmas" as"
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  • "was positive about the parent album as a whole" → "was positive about the album in general"
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  • "he considered "You Make It Feel Like Christmas" to" → "he considered the song to"
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Commercial performance

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  • This section belongs inbetween Music video and Live performances instead
Is this necessary? Plenty of Good Articles exist with this current layout of headings (Used to Love You, Hung Up, Don't Start Now, etc.)
This is the layout that I have been informed is correct, since the chart performance should be closer to the table I believe? So, yes probably. --Kyle Peake (talk) 09:38, 21 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
From my experience, I have never written an article with that type of layout before. This is also the first I have heard of this during a GAN review. Unless you think this is completely mandatory, I would prefer to leave the layout as it stands.
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  • "from holding the" → "from holding the US" on the main text
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  • "In the United States" → "In the US" since you already said United States earlier in the body
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  • "narrowly missed from entering the" → "narrowly missed entering the"
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  • "Instead, it reached the" → "Instead, it reached the US"
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  • "that have not yet charted" → "that are not currently charting" since former top 100 tracks can chart on it
Actually, former Hot 100 tracks cannot enter the Bubbling Under chart.
  • "The single entered at number 11 during the week ending December 23, 2018." → "The song entered the chart at number 11 for the issue date of December 23, 2017."
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  • Citation is needed at the end of this sentence for the debut week
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  • "The following week it peaked at number 2, blocked" → "The following week, it peaked at number two and was blocked"
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  • Again, add citation at the end of the sentence
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  • "It spent a total of four weeks on the Bubbling Under Hot 100 chart." → "The song lasted for four weeks on the Bubbling Under Hot 100."
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  • "peaked at number 37 on the" → "peaked at number 37 on the US"
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  • "Of Stefani's 5 top ten hits on the latter chart, "You Make It Feel Like Christmas"" → "Of Stefani's five top 10 hits on the latter chart, the song" per MOS:NUM
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  • "the single reached number 9" → "the single reached number nine"
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  • "second top ten hit" → "second top 10 track"
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  • "which peaked at number 3" → "peaked at number three"
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  • "It also entered the seasonal" → "The former also entered the seasonal US"
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  • "chart and peaked at number 37" → "chart, peaking at number 37"
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  • "On Canada's charts" → "On Canadian charts"
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  • "It also reached two airplay charts: the" → "It also reached other airplay charts for Canada: the"
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  • "where the single peaked" → "where the song peaked"
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  • "which once peaked at number 3" → "that had previously reached number three"
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  • The following sentence is overkill on Commercial performance and feels not neutral for inclusion at all
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  • "The following year during" → "The following year, during"
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  • "due to heavy airplay rotation" are you sure is the correct phrasing for rotation?
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  • "the song became Stefani's first entry" → "the song became Stefani's first chart entry"
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  • "Her duet with Shelton entered" → "It entered"
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  • "and peaked at number 62" → "and ultimately peaked at number 62"
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  • "it spent two weeks total on the charts" → "the song spent two weeks in total on the Swiss Hitparade chart"
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  • "A similar case occurred in Germany" → "Similar performance was attained in Germany"
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  • "In the United Kingdom, the single" → "In the UK, the song"
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  • You need a citation that verifies her chart history
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  • "on December 22, 2017" → "for the chart dated December 22, 2017"
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  • "it reached a peak of number 98" → "the former reached number 98"
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  • [42][43] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
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  • "it re-entered the Official Singles Chart, peaking" → "it re-entered the chart and peaked"
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  • "on December 28, 2018" → "for the week ending December 28, 2018"
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  • "By December 7, 2018," → "By December 7 of that year,"
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  • "33,500 copies in the United Kingdom" → "33,500 copies in the UK"
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  • Remove wikilink on Official Charts Company
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  • "within the airplay charts in" → "on the airplay charts for"
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  • "Poland and Slovakia" → "Poland, and Slovakia"
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Music video

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  • "was shot in one day" → "was shot over the course of one day"
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  • "by Stefani's long-time collaborator" → "by long-time Stefani collaborator"
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  • "inspiration for the video clip" → "inspiration for the clip"
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  • "was the 1957 film" → "was the 1957 musical film" with the wikilink
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  • "production wrapped and prior to the clip's" → "production was completed and prior to the video's"
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  • "Shelton tweeted that video's style" → "Shelton tweeted that the style of the latter"
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  • "citing Shelton's dislike" → "citing his dislike"
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  • "Stefani first hinted about" → "Stefani first hinted of"
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  • "November 18, 2018. She uploaded" → "November 18, 2018, uploading"
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  • "One of the photos in particular" → "In particular, one of the photos"
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  • "As mentioned, it" → "On the scheduled date, it"
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  • Citation(s) at the end of the sentence should support a Vevo as well as YouTube upload
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  • "during a snowfall" → "as snow falls"
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  • "setting with a backing band" → "setting, with a big backing band"
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  • "much to the surprise of Shelton" → "and the people cause the surprise of Shelton"
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  • "and Stefani wears a silver" → "and Stefani sports a silver"
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  • [59][60] should both be solely at the end of the sentence
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  • "with her look in this segment" → "with her look in the segment"
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  • "shows the duo" → "shows the couple"
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  • "with Shelton's resembling the traditional variety and Stefani's replicating" → "with those built by Stefani replicating"
I'm afraid this would not be a correct wording of the scene. In the video, Shelton builds one snowman and Stefani also builds one snowman. His looks like a traditional snowman while hers looks like Michelangelo.
  • "The couple are again joined by the big band" → "They are again joined by the backing band"
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  • "dancing children who perform their choreography" → "dancing children, who perform their choreography"
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  • "as they sing" → "as the couple sing"
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  • "shows Stefani adding the finishing touches" → "demonstrates Stefani adding the finishing touches"
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  • "After the video fades to black" → "Following the video fading to black"
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  • "Shelton losing control" → "the latter losing control"
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  • "Alongside the release of the formal video" → "Alongside the release of the music video"
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  • "was available for purchase" → "was made available for purchase via iTunes"
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  • "of the music video was published onto" → "of the video was published to"
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  • Remove target on Idolator
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  • "impressed by the video" → "impressed by the visual
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  • "Many critics considered Stefani" → "Multiple critics considered Stefani"
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  • "channeling actress Marilyn Monroe" → "channeling Monroe"
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Live performances

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  • "She wore a festive sheer" → "The former wore a festive sheer"
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  • "dress and ended the performance" → "dress, and ended the performance"
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  • "from the parent album as part of the set list" → "from the album as part of her set list"
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  • "for the portion and" → "when performing the track and"
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  • "claimed that Stefani's" → "opined that Stefani's" per WP:CLAIM
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  • Wikilink ska to itself
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  • "both "You Make It Feel Like Christmas" and a" → "both "You Make It Feel Like Christmas", and a"
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  • "For her appearance," → "For the former's appearance,"
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  • "group of four backup dancers dressed" → "group of four backup dancers, dressed"
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  • "She also appeared on the December 19th" → "She also appeared on the December 19, 2018"
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  • "This performance was praised" → "The performance was praised"
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  • "who wrote: "Stefani brought" → "who wrote that "Stefani brought"
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  • "performed a condensed version of the single" → "performed a condensed version of the song"
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  • "It was broadcast in" → "It was broadcasted in"
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  • Remove wikilink on black and white
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  • "on the same day" → "that same day"
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  • "The performance occurred on November 14, 2019 and Stefani" → "Her performance occurred on November 14, 2019, and Stefani""
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  • "As described by Billboard," → "According to Heran Mamo of Billboard,"
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  • "and eventually broadcast on" → "and later broadcast via"
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  • "on December 4 of the same year" → "on December 4, 2019"
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  • "reported that her performance" → "reported that the performance"
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Track listing

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Credits and personnel

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Charts

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Sales and certifications

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  • Remove as its totally unnecessary, since there are no certifications and 66,000 sales is far from the 200,000 eligible for a UK certification anyway
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References

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  • Copyvio score looks fine; is really high for one URL but that one isn't even included in this article so it's fine
Okay
  • Make sure that all of these are archived using the tool
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  • Ref 8 should cite Amazon Music as publisher instead with target to Amazon (company), while remove "on Amazon Music" from the title
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  • Remove wikilink to Entertainment Weekly on ref 15
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  • Copsey is misspelled on ref 16 and the date is incorrect
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  • Cite Noisey as publisher instead for ref 19 and wikilink to itself
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  • Remove the work/website from ref 37 and cite BDSRadio as publisher instead
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  • Ref 44 is a duplicate of ref 16
Not anymore. The archival tool messed this up when I used it however long ago.
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  • Remove wikilink to YouTube on ref 57 and remove (US)
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  • Remove target on Idolator for ref 64
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That is not the same publication.
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  • Remove target on Interscope for ref 77
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  • Change refs 79 and 80 to citing HRT solely for the publisher, with the target only for the former
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  • Remove the music video from here
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Final comments and verdict

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Kyle Peake – thanks for your patience. I believe all of your comments have been addressed, in addition to several comments above. Let me know if there is anything else I can do. Carbrera (talk) 22:30, 21 June 2020 (UTC).[reply]
Carbrera Thanks a lot for this, I did some brief copy editing and fixed the chart table caption; take a look so you know what to do in the future. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:41, 22 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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