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Reviewer: Zanimum (talk · contribs) 19:59, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Looks fairly straight forward to review. -- Zanimum (talk) 19:59, 7 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Passing "Infobox", pictures.

Intro

  • A few years ago, I would have been satisfied with "remainder of the third season", but there's just too many half-seasons in the TV world these days, including with DVD releases, and my mind instantly went to that concept. Perhaps "This episode was released on DVD in July 2008, as part of the third season set", or something similar?
 Done

Plot

  • Heidi confronts Lauren before Heidi leaves the club? But I thought that Lauren was already leaving? They both came to that decision at the same time?
 Done; I clarified that Heidi found Lauren before she was able to leave.

Production

  • Very cool insight via Graden about the presentation of the rumours as a personal conflict, as opposed to a publicized controversy. That's worth including in the main article, it shows a lot about the producers' vision of the program.
 Done; thanks for the suggestion!

Release and reception

  • "the time of its premiere" --> "the time of its first airing" (when I read premiere, I thought it was related to the season premiere)
 Done
  • At the time, it was the highest rated Hills episode. Do you know which episode beat this one?
 Done; it was the premiere of the second half of the season.
  • Where did you find the info on overall 2007 ratings? Ref 11 was published in August 2007, so without clicking through the link, I can tell that it can only verify the ratings for that individual episode, not the year-end ratings for 2007.
 Done; I clarified the wording to more accurately present the information in the citation.

References

  • Is there another source for the third season DVD release? Keep MTV Shop, but I'm hoping there's some sort of "this week on DVD" listing that can be added as a secondary source.
 Done

Passing "External links". -- Zanimum (talk) 18:23, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Does seem to be anything else that I can comment on, so pass! -- Zanimum (talk) 23:00, 10 April 2014 (UTC)[reply]
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