Talk:You (Regard, Troye Sivan and Tate McRae song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:56, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 07:56, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• "It was written by the latters" → "It was written by the performers"
• Mention the teaser and it being their first collaboration before the release sentence
• "It received critical acclaim from" → "The song received critical acclaim from"
• Only mention countries it reached "the top 50" in the first sentence since below that is not notable
• "in the US and" → "in the United States and" per MOS:US, as this is the first mention of the country
• "The official music video was" → "The accompanying music video was"
• Remove the word official from YouTube channel because that is obvious for the lead
• "and the United States." → "and the US."

Background and composition

• "with Regard uploading a" → "with Regard also uploading a"
• Regard's elaboration statements seems like it should be the "Collaborating with..." one, as that is the only quote of this in the source
• [11] should solely be invoked at the end of the sentence
• "Sivan and Mc Rare sing about" → "Sivan and McRae sing about"
• "During the lyrics, they sing," → "On the chorus, they sing,"

Reception

• Only write music critics, omitting the writers part
• "to him, create an" → "to him, creates an"
• Remove or replace PopClub per WP:SELFPUB
• "vocals from them" → "vocals from the singers"
• "likening the "sultry and" → "appreciating the "sultry and"
• "an "infatuation and summer" anthem, that" → "an "infatuation" and summer anthem that"
• "opined that "['You'] is a great" → "opined that "['You'] is [a] great"
• "should be […] with each artist" → "should be [with] each artist"
• Only identify the United States chart as Billboard Hot 100
• "It also peaked atop" → "The song also peaked atop"
• "more than 500,000 units." → "more than 500,000 certified units in the US." per MOS:US
• "the Netherlands,[28] Singapore,[29] as well as" → "the Netherlands[28] and Singapore,[29] as well as"

Promotion

• Wikilink lyric video to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT
• Pipe acoustic to Acoustic music
• I don't think "on 14 June" is needed when you mentioned the date a sentence before the later part
• "and controlling the video." → "and taking control."
• "who's face is covered" → "whose face is covered"
• "Tate was in Los Angeles," → "Tate was in LA," per the source wording
• "a really cool idea"." → "a really cool idea."" per MOS:QUOTE
• The black setting and LED wall parts are unsourced
• "of MTV's Video Music Awards" → "of the MTV Video Music Awards"

Track listing

• Good

Credits and personnel

• Are you sure this section can't be created?<

• Done. Iaof2017 (talk) 18:53, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

Charts

Weekly charts

• Good

Year-end charts

• Remove US Dance/Mix Show Airplay Songs per WP:USCHARTS

Certifications

• Good

Release history

• Good

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 36.3%!!!
• Wikilink Apple Music on the first citation of ref 1
• What exactly makes ref 7 a reliable source?
• Fix MOS:QWQ issues with ref 12
• Remove or replace ref 14 per WP:SELFPUB
• Wikilink TopHit on ref 52
• Wikilink Recorded Music NZ on ref 55

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; that went smoothly! --K. Peake 09:16, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

• Hello @Kyle Peake: glad to hear from you again and thanks for your continuous work. I think I responded to everything. Cheers. Iaof2017 (talk) 19:12, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

• Iaof2017 The only problem I have now is that you have not changed Regard's elaboration quote in background to the one the source mentions, "Collaborating with Troye and Regard was an amazing experience. It's a totally different vibe than any of my usual songs, but still has the emotional and lyrical depth that I always try to write." --K. Peake 20:25, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

• Fixed @Kyle Peake:. Iaof2017 (talk) 23:07, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, looks a lot better well done! --K. Peake 07:03, 25 October 2022 (UTC)