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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 08:45, 7 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This can be completed by me within a day! --K. Peake 08:45, 7 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • No infobox here is acceptable since it could be disputed which one would belong at the top
  • "that appeared as the first track" → "that first appeared as the opening track"
  • Mention the release year of Dylan's eponymous album
  • Add a sentence after the first one about how Dylan recorded eight takes
  • "Dylans version is more" → "Dylan's version is more"
  • Change the although part to simply mentioning that some critics praised its opening track, to avoid too much detail for the lead

Jesse Fuller version

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Mention the release year of "San Francisco Bay Blues"
  • "written and performed by Fuller was" → "written and performed by Fuller, was"
  • "washboard and fotdella" → "washboard, and fotdella"
  • "on the album's back cover." → "on its back cover."
  • "The notes claim that" → "The notes claim,"

Bob Dylan version

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Background and recording

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  • Pipe John H. Hammond to John Hammond (record producer)
  • ""'cause we were..." should not use double speech marks twice at the start
  • "but this was abandoned after interruptions, and later abandoned" double usage of abandoned reads confusingly; reword this
  • Remove wikilink on liner notes
  • Remove excess space after "She's No Good"
  • Either remove, replace or add appropriate text to the img per MOS:IMAGERELEVANCE
  • "one of several songs" → "was one of several songs"
  • "me' [in "You're No Good"]"." → "me' [in 'You're No Good']"."
  • "Harvey thinks that" → "Harvey thought that" to be consistent

Reception

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  • Either relate the Michael Gray review to the song or remove it
  • "seem likely to have"" → "seem likely to have"."
  • Uncut should be italicised
  • "Robert Shelton wrote about the song" → "Shelton wrote about the song"
  • Why does the Shelton quote have a speech mark at the end when one is not used to start it?
  • "said in a 2022 interview that he had" → "said in a 2022 interview he had"

Notes

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  • Good

References

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Final comments and verdict

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