Talk:Yin Yoga/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Miniapolis (talk · contribs) 14:26, 7 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this. Miniapolis 14:26, 7 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

In beginning to read the article, I sense a slight POV (see good article criterion #4). Peacock words such as "widespread" in "widespread teaching activities" (end of the first paragraph) should be removed.

There's some inconsistency throughout the article on the capitalization of "yin" (I don't think it should be capitalized, except when opening a sentence). I've finished reading the article; it's almost there, and complies with WP:NPOV except for the instance mentioned above. After running Checklinks, I tagged the one dead link: that to "The Delight of Insight" in Yoga Journal.

Thanks so much for the go-over. I appreciate your comments. Will implement them ASAP. RL is pressing at the moment. EMP (talk)

Take your time; I'll put the review on hold if needed. All the best, Miniapolis 23:48, 13 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I've incorporated your comments. Thanks for catching those dead links. In one case, I found another ref for the same content which also has a live link. In the other, I simply removed the no-longer-good link, and left it as a book-style ref. As suggested, I changed Yin to lower case, and for added consistency did the same for Hatha yoga and Daoist and Taoist yoga. I have changed daoist to taoist for consistency.

In addition, I proofed the article and made a few copyedits for improved clarity. Thanks again for your kind help with this. EMP (talk) 23:19, 16 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Looks like a GA now—congratulations! However, I'm going to list it at Philosophy and religion because it seems more appropriate there than at Language and literature. All the best, Miniapolis 18:33, 17 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]