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Good articleYesterday's Wine has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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November 14, 2011Good article nomineeListed

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 15:20, 11 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. Hi, sorry, but this entry is straight up WEIRD. sounds like creative writing turned encyclopedic gone wrong. love the album more than most anything though. thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.117.120.24 (talk) 03:45, 13 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  2. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
    "hadvast" seems to be a typo; I think it should be "vast", but that doesn't make sense, too.
Corrected.--GDuwenTell me! 15:56, 14 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
    Is Ref 4 and 6 the references for the full "Concept" section? Can you do the same shortcut-formatting like in Phases and Stages?
I added two more references for the other two paragraphs. Refs now with shortcuts--GDuwenTell me! 15:56, 14 November 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  1. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  2. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  3. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  4. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  5. Overall:
    Pass/Fail: