Talk:Yehudi lights/GA1
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 15:35, 23 January 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 15:35, 23 January 2017 (UTC)
- Many thanks. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:45, 23 January 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox;
- Yehudi lights have again attracted interest; again in the sense, at present, also this is never discussed in the body.
- See the whole paragraph in "Later developments", except the first sentence.
- Section 1 & 2; All good
- Thanks.
- Section 3;
- director of technical services; use capitals for initialization; Director of Technical Services
- Done.
- What is the necessity of quote? Merge it with general prose
- Done.
- Link "US Army Air Force"
- Done.
- Abbreviate units from the second mention
- I think we should either abbreviate all of them or none; I prefer the words.
- used lforward-pointing lamps; "lforward"?
- Fixed.
- Section 4; all good
- Thanks.
- File:PBY Catalina landing.jpg doesn't have appropriate summary
- Extended summary on Commons.
- One dead link identified
- Added archive link.
- 1% confidence, violation unlikely, well done.
- Good work, Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 07:08, 27 January 2017 (UTC)
- Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 07:29, 27 January 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 10:47, 2 February 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
- Many thanks for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 12:36, 2 February 2017 (UTC)