Talk:Yash Chopra (book)/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:10, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:10, 28 May 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Non-free use rationale looks good.
- I couldn't find any issues with the infobox.
- The lead section also looks good.
Summary
[edit]- No issues here.
Development and writing
[edit]- "In it he talks" → "In it, he talks"
- "after watching Darr, she" → "after watching Darr that she"
- "wrote Chopra" → "wrote to Chopra"
- "he tired of speaking" → "he was tired of speaking"
Release
[edit]- "who chose to do research on a" → "who chose to research a"
Critical reception
[edit]- This section looks good.
Publication history
[edit]- No issues here.
References
[edit]- Sources are archived.
Infobox and lead
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