Talk:Yakov and the Seven Thieves/GA1

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 16:02, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 16:02, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

*My first thought is that most distinguished literature articles have, in addition/association with a reception section, typically have an "Analysis" or "Interpretations" section. There seems to be some material in the "Reception" section that could migrate to and populate an "Analysis"-type section. Another more backstage sort of concern would be that within the "Background" section, perhaps there should be a distinct subsection for the book's illustration.

- Can you give me an example of such content? I would love to expand to an analysis section. The illustration is fine to be a part of the book's background. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 05:45, 13 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Browsing the GA list, the books with such sections are more widely-known classics, in the vein of Cat in the Hat, The Tale of Peter Rabbit, The Jungle Book- perhaps Yakov has critical commentary only in the form of reviews, rather than more academic evaluation. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 21:44, 13 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - You are correct @QatarStarsLeague:, I did not find any academic or journalistic entry for analysis and all, which would help us in developing a section of such name. The book is a frivolous release by a popstar, according to me it sure won't get the academic credibility ever unlike say works by Roald Dahl or Enid Blyton etc. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 04:35, 14 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

*Beyond that, my only questions would be about the "Release history" section. Obviously having been released in a host of places, why are dates dealt for just two individual countries?

Great work, just a couple of things to fix. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:51, 13 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

The release history section I think you can ignore for the time-being. I'm still collating the actual release dates for different nations. —IB ^{[ Poke ]} 05:45, 13 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]