Talk:Y Hubo Alguien/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:45, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

"which combines R&B," with what?
"had his partner" missing word?
"the Billboard Latin" italic for Billboard.
"chart where it spent eight weeks at this poisition", chart, spending eight weeks there.
You link "produced" in the main article but not in the lead, do it both.
"1997).[4][1] " order.
"Alfanno was commissioned by Ralph Mercado, the executive producer of RMM, to write a song" song/song repetitive.
"However the song was rejected because its lyrics were not written by a woman.[7]" whaaat?
"after a few drinks," not encyclopedic.
"to Marc Anthony's greatest..." no need here (and subsequently) to start using his first name again.
"On the review of the album " reiterate the album, the previous album you mentioned was the other artist who covered it.
"the 1998 Tropical Airplay year" overlinked.
Ref 27 has spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.

That's all I have on a quick run. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:20, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, TRM. When I re-read the article where it mentions why the song was rejected, it didn't elaborate enough. So I did a quick scour on the Internet and found it was because the song was supposed to sung by a woman, but the song was rejected because he wasn't a woman himself so I amended the article to mention. Other than, how does it look it now? I took care everything else you mentioned. Erick (talk) 01:38, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]