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Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Nicely constructed article - why are you not autopatrolled? thanks.

Aszx5000 (talk) 13:55, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Hey man im josh talk 17:19, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that the San Diego YMCA served over 125 million military personnel?
  • Reviewed:
  • Comment: This is my first DYK nomination; any pointers on how to do better are always welcome!
Created by RevelationDirect (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

RevelationDirect (talk) 21:50, 22 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Review:

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: No - Sources are for this building specifically, maybe change to something like "... that the San Diego YMCA building served over 125 military personnel?" (add "building")?
QPQ: None required.

Overall: I'm a new DYk reviewer, so requesting fresh review. GoldRomean (talk) 19:54, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@RevelationDirect: Review complete (requesting second review, though). GoldRomean (talk) 20:00, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
You can get a handy template right here.

Length Newness Cited hook Interest Sources Neutrality Plagiarism/paraphrase
Impressive 0.0% on Earwig's copyvio detector. It stretches belief a bit to say the YMCA served the equivalent of the entire population of Japan or Mexico, but I'll chalk it up to it having been operating for a long time. Bremps... 06:25, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]