Talk:Wyoming Highway 257/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:20, 11 September 2021 (UTC)
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- "7-mile (11 km) ..." although I've been recommending reducing the "accuracy" of these kinds of digits, I think we can safely go to at least one decimal place here.
- Fixed.
- Is there a link for "expressway"?
- Added.
- "The $36 million project" inflate.
- Removed from the lead, since an inflation conversion would require a citation here.
- "The 7-mile-long (11 km), two-lane..." see first comment, applies here too.
- Fixed.
- "of average annual daily traffic" according to our article, it's "annual average daily traffic".
- Fixed.
- "on WYO 220 was proposed" overlinked.
- Fixed.
- "the Wyoming Department of Transportation in " overlinked and already abbreviated.
- Fixed.
- "not answering public feedback" would "responding to" feedback make more sense?
- Fixed, though in this case it was a matter of not even picking up the phone (which is a bit weird).
- "$37 million " inflate. And any following figures.
- Added.
- "the U.S. Congress" do we really need U.S. here?
- Fixed.
- "including the North Platte River bridge" overlinked.
- Fixed.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 17:04, 12 September 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: All points addressed. Thanks for the review. SounderBruce 21:26, 12 September 2021 (UTC)