Talk:WrestleMania XXX/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 10:29, 8 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Now I have been wanting to review this article for good article status for sometime but I would have probably failed it due to stability issues. Since the article has been semi-protected for a year however, I think I can review this now. good888 (talk) 10:29, 8 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks good888! I look forward to improving the article even more by addressing your concerns! I am quite busy nowadays and might not reply very quickly though. starship.paint ~ ¡Olé! 14:05, 8 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay. I have been quite busy as of late, so the review might be finished by the weekend. good888 (talk) 09:08, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

It's okay. I must say though, I will very likely have no access to Wikipedia from 18 to 22 Feb. starship.paint ~ ¡Olé! 12:09, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Well here is my review:

Lead section

Slam! Wrestling and The Times-Picayune are not linked here but are linked later in the article. Link them in this section.

Done. starship.paint

Production

"In May 2014, Bryan revealed in an interview that he also believed that WWE only decided to give him the big WrestleMania spotlight only after Punk quit." I think only one erm "only" is needed in this sentence.

Done. starship.paint

"After the match, Triple H turned heel by attacking Bryan" Heel had already been linked earlier in the "storylines"

Done. starship.paint

"resulting in special guest referee Shawn Michaels attacking Bryan" I would note that Shawn Michaels turned heel in the process.

1) source doesn't say Michaels turned heel 2) Michaels had a storyline reason - Bryan kneed Michaels' best friend HHH in the face. starship.paint

"(who still received a negative fan reaction at Elimination Chamber) Add that he defeated Alberto Del Rio at the event.

Done. starship.paint

Event

"while there were also Spanish and French commentators at ringside." You might as well add who they were.

I want to, but no reliable sources give their names. I searched. starship.paint

"the first half could be watched for free on WWE.com, YouTube, and other social media outlets," Link YouTube.

Done. starship.paint

"Analysis was provided by a panel of Josh Mathews, Mick Foley, Booker T and Shawn Michaels; joining midway were retired National Football League linebacker Shawne Merriman, Jimmy Hart, Alex Riley and Trish Stratus. Renee Young directed social media discussion, while Byron Saxton and Tom Phillips conducted backstage interviews." There are no sources for this paragraph at all. Add one.

Actually the sources are there, just at the bottom of the whole section. Same for the similar problems below. Fixed anyway. starship.paint

Likewise for the next paragraph. Add one there as well.

Fixed. starship.paint

"The second match saw The New Age Outlaws (Road Dogg and Billy Gunn) and Kane take on The Shield (Dean Ambrose, Seth Rollins and Roman Reigns). The pace of the match was quick; the end of the match saw Kane being hit by Reigns' signature spear, and Reigns then hit both Outlaws simultaneously with another spear. The Shield then performed their Triple Powerbomb maneuver on both Outlaws for a decisive victory." Once again, this paragraph is unsourced. And the paragraph after that is also unsourced.

Fixed. starship.paint

"with Undertaker's streak of victories at WrestleMania on the line." Undefeated WrestleMania streak of The Undertaker has already been linked in the production section so unlink the link in this sentence.

Done. starship.paint

"The match was a slow one with Undertaker looking old and worn down throughout." Possible you could add a source here?

Reference 60 at the end of the paragraph says The story of this match was Taker looked old and worn down. starship.paint

Reception

"ranking third below Netflix and YouTube but above Amazon, Hulu and HBO." Unlink YouTube, as it should be linked in the event section.

Done. starship.paint

"Tucker also noted that the Hogan, Stone Cold and the Rock's segment was "meaningless, surreal and a lot of fun". The Hogan? I think you mean Hulk Hogan.

Done. starship.paint

Aftermath

"while Bryan defeated Kane in a Extreme Rules match." Link Extreme Rules match under Hardcore wrestling.

Done. starship.paint

"On the next Raw on June 2, Batista quit WWE in the storyline" Explain why Batista quit. I know it was because of him not receiving a one on one match for the WWE World Heavyweight championship.

Added. starship.paint

Results

I remember that there was a table for the 31-man Battle royal. May I ask why it was removed? Can it be added back in?

No reliable sources for the either timing of eliminations or a full list which wrestler eliminated who. I searched. Only info that is in the RS is the order of elimination, even so, the sources missed out when Woods and Sin Cara were eliminated. We can't violate WP:OR. starship.paint

References

Refs 10 and 18 are broken.

Ref 18 - Forbes? is fine for me. Fixed 10 and some others. starship.paint

For ref 32 can you note that the publisher was Pro Wrestling Torch?

Done. starship.paint

Is Wrestleview a reliable source? I am not too sure it is.

WP:PW has used it as a reliable source for a long time. I also answered that question at Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Money in the Bank (2011)/archive3 Reference/Formatting Comments from Ceranthor. -- starship.paint

Going to place on hold for now. good888 (talk) 10:51, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

@Good888: - (although I missed one or two at the time I pinged you) now it's all fixed or rebutted! Thank you for going through, and await your reply! starship.paint ~ ¡Olé! 12:45, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
- Nicely done. Going to promote to GA status. good888 (talk) 14:45, 14 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]