Talk:WoodmenLife Tower/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: APK (talk · contribs) 22:51, 7 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'll be reviewing this article. I look forward to learning about the topic. APK hi :-) (talk) 22:51, 7 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox...

link "International Style"

owner still says Woodmen of the World instead of WoodmenLife, unless you mean that's what the company was called when it was built

Lede...

first word is bolded but "The" isn't used elsewhere when mentioning the tower's name

"building" and "headquarters" don't need to be linked, but link "LED display"

Description...

unlink "headquarters"

lowercase f in "Formerly Woodmen..."

period after "roof style" and start a new sentence

add cubic yards conversion

"the building as had" - has not as

"As of 2014, the building was 94 percent occupied" - any chance you have an update on this

link "U.S. Bank"

comma after "Nebraska"

link LED

History...

comma after 1932

side note: such a shame those beautiful buildings were demolished

unlink "U.S. Bank"

"In November 1967,and the building" - remove "and"

remove "th" in "June 6th"

"until the construction" - get rid of "the"

do you know when Top of the World restaurant closed

link "College World Series"

can you elaborate a bit about the "valuation and taxation" controversy

Peregrine falcon project...

add abbreviate to Nebraska Peregrine Falcon Project so NPFP can used in the next sentence

Reception...

unlink Douglas County since it's linked earlier

unlink "skyline"

Gallery...

link "September 11, 2001 attacks"

External links...

add Commons category

@Etriusus: Thanks for your work on the article! If you have any questions, let me know. APK hi :-) (talk) 23:40, 7 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@APK That should be everything. The only thing I wasn't able to do was expand on the occupancy, I took a look but couldn't find anything more recent. Also, I couldn't find an exact date for when Top of the World restaurant closed, but the latest I found coverage on it was 2005. Sometime between 2005 and 2010, maybe 2007 (but that would be WP:OR). Thanks for doing this review so quickly, I really appreciate it. 🏵️Etrius ( Us) 01:29, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Etriusus: Looks good. Nice job! APK hi :-) (talk) 01:44, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]