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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 05:28, 27 October 2018 (UTC)
Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 05:28, 27 October 2018 (UTC)
- Most plots have a lot more detail, from the beginning to the end. This is more of a synopsis of a movie that hasn't come out yet.
- The lead has to be longer than just two sentences, as it does not summarize the whole article yet.
- The lead was three sentences but I get your point :). Each paragraph is now represented by a sentence in the LEAD.
- You should go into detail for some of the reviews, especially from major newspapers.
- Last reference does not have the same format as the others.
Should be it for now. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:01, 28 October 2018 (UTC)
- @Nova Crystallis: I believe I have addressed your comments. Let me know what you think. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 14:35, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- One more thing. I think you should rename your criticism section to "Reception and awards," criticism has a negative connotation. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 22:54, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
- Done - Thanks for the reminder of the MOS suggested heading title. Best, Barkeep49 (talk) 01:28, 31 October 2018 (UTC)
- One more thing. I think you should rename your criticism section to "Reception and awards," criticism has a negative connotation. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 22:54, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
Passing. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 04:03, 31 October 2018 (UTC)