Talk:Without (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review

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Hello. I will review this article. --Edge3 (talk) 02:36, 30 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Okay. --TIAYN (talk) 20:51, 30 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done I don't know who Skinner is. Could you please add that info or a link to the appropriate article?--Edge3 (talk) 05:50, 1 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Done I think the plot summary is getting too detailed sometimes. It needs to be shortened. --Edge3 (talk) 15:15, 3 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'm really sorry for delaying this review. I've been very busy in real life and cannot handle the responsibility of reviewing this article. I'm turning it over to another editor. --Edge3 (talk) 17:05, 4 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

That's okay. --TIAYN (talk) 17:16, 4 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Question - Is there no reception information available? The leftorium 17:06, 4 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Not as i know off, i've checked. But trying to find reception information is hard for an episode from 2001, an its hard enough to find reception information to the season article. But maybe you'll have better luck than me? --TIAYN (talk) 17:16, 4 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I saw the article needed a second opinion, so I'll try and give mine. I don't see much wrong, but here's some things I've caught:

Done You've already linked to Mulder in the summary, so no need to do so in Production.

Done Do you have a source for the Prod. code?

I used the bookled, is that okay?

Done Yeah, but it needs to be formatted with Template:cite book. The Flash ^{talk} 20:09, 4 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done You've already linked to Alien Bounty Hunter in the summary, so it doesn't need to be linked in Production.

The Flash ^{talk} 17:40, 4 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done Everything's looking good - one thing I still see is the "see also," which needs to be used in the template. I believe it's Template:See also, but if not the correct one should be linked on that template. The Flash ^{talk} 00:14, 5 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

A few more things found:

By "Bookled," do you mean the booklet for the season DVD? If so, a few more fields need to be put in - "page" and "ISBN" (for the DVD, info should be available on Amazon.com)

I've added the page number. I can't find it on Amazon, and its does not have an author or an "ISBN" i can find. Its simply a book included in the DVD set. --TIAYN (talk) 13:14, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done"The episode did not make it to the list of the ten most watched television shows that week on Sky1." -> "[...]that week on the channel."

Then I'll be satisfied. The Flash ^{talk} 21:07, 5 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, I'm sold. Now, as the first nominator has indicated he is extremely busy, I am unsure whether I should inform him or just pass it now. Thoughts? The Flash ^{talk} 23:05, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I've been checking this page a few times, actually. Feel free to pass if you think it's ready. --Edge3 (talk) 23:14, 6 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

So is it a pass? --TIAYN (talk) 14:06, 7 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Yes :) The Flash ^{talk} 00:10, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks :D --TIAYN (talk) 03:42, 8 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]