Talk:Wisconsin dairy industry/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:51, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:51, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Images are free to use.
"ageing" → "aging" (American English)
"later half" → "latter half" (both uses)
Remove the comma after "the farms".
Remove the comma after "the railroad" (unnecessary).
Remove the comma after "switched to dairy farming" (near the end of sentence).
"to higher" → "to a higher"
"products has" → "products have"
Remove the comma after "2000".
"Wisconsin have" → "Wisconsin has"
Archive sources (either manually or with this tool).
Also, don't try to have website links (ex. "www." and ".org") present in the "|website=" parameter (find the actual name of the source instead).

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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