Talk:Wirtschaftsschule (Bavaria)

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i might be wrong, but this is a big piece of google-translated crap

I don't think that you're wrong. The title itself needs to be changed--I would recommend keeping the German 'Wirtschaftschule' because there really is no accurate or accepted translation, and changing 'Bayern' to 'Bavaria.' So the new title would be "Wirtschaftschule (Bavaria)". —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 66.98.99.155 (talk • contribs) .

yep either that or if change something that translates Wirtschaft a little better. The meaning here is more on the lines of commerce.

Anyway I condenced the section about the different directions as they are far too detailed for non-german use. Agathoclea 23:06, 3 February 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Copy edit (July 2008)

Did a copy edit and tagged the section "general information" as confusing. I don't understand the paragraph "The Wirtschaftsschule programs all end after the tenth year of schooling. Thus, the four-year program begins after the sixth year, the three-year program after the seventh year, and the two-year program after the eighth year." Please clarify and rewrite, thanks :)

-Samuel Tan 06:15, 9 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]